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A 5-7-5 Poem5 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like the way your 5-7-5 verse evolves from the miracle of birth to the "unwrapping" of the Christian story to commitment and belief. An excellent entry for the contest. I wish you luck! Debbie
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I like the way your 5-7-5 verse evolves from the miracle of birth to the "unwrapping" of the Christian story to commitment and belief. An excellent entry for the contest. I wish you luck! Debbie
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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Bryce 1
Faith takes practice, that's what John Irving said through the character known as Owen Meany. Favorite book. Belief does lie under our faith, or for some, nothing at all. Faith is very hard to follow through with, blindly we go forth into the unknown with faith as our only guide and protector. We leap off a cliff with faith that we will either fly or a net will catch us. Without faith, we'd stay atop the mountain, safe and bored.
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Faith takes practice, that's what John Irving said through the character known as Owen Meany. Favorite book. Belief does lie under our faith, or for some, nothing at all. Faith is very hard to follow through with, blindly we go forth into the unknown with faith as our only guide and protector. We leap off a cliff with faith that we will either fly or a net will catch us. Without faith, we'd stay atop the mountain, safe and bored.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Peter Jarvis
This is a beautiful 5-7-5 poem that perfectly captures the essence of faith during the Christmas season. The imagery and message are both inspiring and uplifting, highlighting the miraculous birth that brings faith, hope, and belief to light.
Your participation in the writing prompt is truly commendable, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing this touching piece!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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This is a beautiful 5-7-5 poem that perfectly captures the essence of faith during the Christmas season. The imagery and message are both inspiring and uplifting, highlighting the miraculous birth that brings faith, hope, and belief to light.
Your participation in the writing prompt is truly commendable, and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing this touching piece!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you so very much
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a wonderful 5-7-5 poem. He was born a miracle to be sacrificed for our sin. It's a sad world that we live in because a lot of people don't believe in what they can't see.
Well done and good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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This is a wonderful 5-7-5 poem. He was born a miracle to be sacrificed for our sin. It's a sad world that we live in because a lot of people don't believe in what they can't see.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you so very much
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You're welcome
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I think this is a great faith-based 5-7-5. It seems to reverse the idea of unwrapping a Christmas present and shows how a human's feelings/faith/testimony can be unwrapped instead. Nice share.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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I think this is a great faith-based 5-7-5. It seems to reverse the idea of unwrapping a Christmas present and shows how a human's feelings/faith/testimony can be unwrapped instead. Nice share.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you so very much