Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Where is she?"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
3 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Holy smokes batman you kick butt! I can feel the thickness between them.They're gonna scrap it out for sure! An excellent right. Please continue this very evocative story. It's also creepily good! Your writing style is unique as well. And you can tell by the comments you make that you have certainly done your homework. It's a great job, there's only one way to fix this!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Holy smokes batman you kick butt! I can feel the thickness between them.They're gonna scrap it out for sure! An excellent right. Please continue this very evocative story. It's also creepily good! Your writing style is unique as well. And you can tell by the comments you make that you have certainly done your homework. It's a great job, there's only one way to fix this!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Rick Gardner
Very intriguing and suspenseful. I have no idea what is to happen next, well done. Many individuals come into play here and all seem to have some questions to answer, better sooner than later.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Very intriguing and suspenseful. I have no idea what is to happen next, well done. Many individuals come into play here and all seem to have some questions to answer, better sooner than later.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate any and all feedback but the excellent rating and stars makes me want to continue writing!
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your excerpt from "Sandra's Lover" skillfully builds suspense and intrigue with each passing moment. The detailed descriptions and the interactions between characters create a vivid and engaging narrative, leaving readers eager to discover what has happened to Aliss.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Your excerpt from "Sandra's Lover" skillfully builds suspense and intrigue with each passing moment. The detailed descriptions and the interactions between characters create a vivid and engaging narrative, leaving readers eager to discover what has happened to Aliss.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate any and all feedback but the excellent rating and stars makes me want to continue writing!
