Comment from Trina Layne

Excellent

Excellent short piece and I like your snappy title. Our desire should be to reflect Christ's character and make the world brighter and better. Congratulations on your writing!

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024

Thank you so mucch.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Charged, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that God came to Earth as a man to give us a Savior, mentor, friend, and purpose.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024

Deeply appreciated.

Comment from Adriana Del Barrio

Good

This is the shortest poem I've ever seen, yet it's so powerful. Writing about Jesus is such a beautiful way to express the Christmas spirit. I absolutely love it.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024

I appreciate your review.

Comment from Peter Jarvis

Excellent

This haiku beautifully captures the essence of the Christmas spirit and the message of hope and light that Jesus brings to the world. It's simple yet profound, and it resonates deeply with the theme of faith and the holiday season.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024

Thank you for your lovely review.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very meaningful Christmas poetry for the contest and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you the best in the contest and that you have a lovely day. Merry Christmas. Patricia.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024

Thank you for your lovely review.