The Star
5-7-5 Christmas Poem2 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great 5-7-5 poem and you have nailed it. The shining star represents Jesus Christ our savior. The picture you chose compliments the poem.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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This is a great 5-7-5 poem and you have nailed it. The shining star represents Jesus Christ our savior. The picture you chose compliments the poem.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Cecilia. I appreciate your kind words and good luck wish.
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Peter Jarvis
What a beautiful and poignant haiku! You've captured the essence of Christmas and the profound faith that it represents in such a compact and impactful way. The imagery of piercing the night sky to bring light into the world is especially powerful, reflecting the hope and salvation that Jesus represents for many people during the holiday season.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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What a beautiful and poignant haiku! You've captured the essence of Christmas and the profound faith that it represents in such a compact and impactful way. The imagery of piercing the night sky to bring light into the world is especially powerful, reflecting the hope and salvation that Jesus represents for many people during the holiday season.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Peter. You have so beautifully described exactly what I was trying to convey in this little poem. I am grateful that it touched in that way. Blessings to you during this Christmas season.
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I loved it.
Take care