Spiritual Rhythm
A Lune of Spiritual art21 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
I enjoyed your lune poem for the contest with a bonus of an acrostic poem as well. Vivid imagery in each line. Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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I enjoyed your lune poem for the contest with a bonus of an acrostic poem as well. Vivid imagery in each line. Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your generous six and very kind review.
Comment from karenina
Hah! It's a Line Acrostic! Why not?
"Tin roof harmony" fills my auditory senses with sweet memories!
Your poem says so much more than the obvious!
Very cool....
Karenina
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Hah! It's a Line Acrostic! Why not?
"Tin roof harmony" fills my auditory senses with sweet memories!
Your poem says so much more than the obvious!
Very cool....
Karenina
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you so very much for your review.
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Merry Christmas!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Lune poetry contest. Very nice mental imagery in just a few words. I can almost hear the rain making music on the metal roof. nice acrostic also. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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An excellent entry for the Lune poetry contest. Very nice mental imagery in just a few words. I can almost hear the rain making music on the metal roof. nice acrostic also. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much Marilyn.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I thought I knew what a lune was - until I looked it up. The 1st answer, and most common is the region bounded by 2 circular arcs (the overlapped part with concave and a convex sides. The 2nd is a leash for a hawk. The 3rd is a fit of madness. Only coming in 4th do I get to 'American haiku', a poem of 3 lines.
And all my life I thought it referred to someone who was looney tunes. huh!
Oh, BTW - my wife and I love afternoon... --- never mind.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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I thought I knew what a lune was - until I looked it up. The 1st answer, and most common is the region bounded by 2 circular arcs (the overlapped part with concave and a convex sides. The 2nd is a leash for a hawk. The 3rd is a fit of madness. Only coming in 4th do I get to 'American haiku', a poem of 3 lines.
And all my life I thought it referred to someone who was looney tunes. huh!
Oh, BTW - my wife and I love afternoon... --- never mind.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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I'm bad at spelling, I thought a lune was a water bird. Thank you for the kind review.
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loon
Comment from Trina Layne
Hey, nicely done. I love it. Congratulations on your writing. I wish you the best with your contest entry. Thanks for sharing this gem. Keep writing!
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Hey, nicely done. I love it. Congratulations on your writing. I wish you the best with your contest entry. Thanks for sharing this gem. Keep writing!
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you so very much for the excellent review.
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says
it all! I really enjoyed the read of these words. Thank you for the author's
notes - they speak volumes! The artwork is interesting and goes well
with these words. Merry Christmas! Blessings, Maria
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says
it all! I really enjoyed the read of these words. Thank you for the author's
notes - they speak volumes! The artwork is interesting and goes well
with these words. Merry Christmas! Blessings, Maria
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much Harmony.
Comment from Begin Again
Nature tends to lend us a symphony of sounds if only we would take the time to stop and listen. Instead of fearing or hating the storm, listen and let it strum a new song. Beautifully said.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Nature tends to lend us a symphony of sounds if only we would take the time to stop and listen. Instead of fearing or hating the storm, listen and let it strum a new song. Beautifully said.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2024
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Your review made my day.
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is great! Both a lune and an acrostic -- how nice! Good musical references. Nice angle on the rain in the photo. We were blessed with three days of showers last week, and we dearly needed them. God's timing is always perfect! Blessings & merry Christmas! Carol
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This is great! Both a lune and an acrostic -- how nice! Good musical references. Nice angle on the rain in the photo. We were blessed with three days of showers last week, and we dearly needed them. God's timing is always perfect! Blessings & merry Christmas! Carol
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much, Carol for the oh so generous review.
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My pleasure. Short poem, well written. Carol
Comment from royowen
An excellent Lune poem, these aren't easy, I can remember when we had a tin roof, it was a marvellous thing to hear that wonderfully peaceful sound, I don't know anyone who doesn't like it, well done D&V, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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An excellent Lune poem, these aren't easy, I can remember when we had a tin roof, it was a marvellous thing to hear that wonderfully peaceful sound, I don't know anyone who doesn't like it, well done D&V, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Roy so very much for your kind thoughts and review.
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Most welcome
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Don,
Thanks for stirring one of my favorite memories from childhood. My father would take me and my sister to the barn during storms. We would sit on a bale of hay and listen to him tell stories with the backdrop of rain on the tin roof. It still gives me warm memories to hear it.
Merry Christmas,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hi Don,
Thanks for stirring one of my favorite memories from childhood. My father would take me and my sister to the barn during storms. We would sit on a bale of hay and listen to him tell stories with the backdrop of rain on the tin roof. It still gives me warm memories to hear it.
Merry Christmas,
Rhonda
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Rhonda for your special and thoughtful Review.