Beneath the Mistletoe
One must be careful, you may not know who is watching.2 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
An excellent read, "and licked her lipw" "She would wanted answers from"
a couple of typos here, I really like the way you have left the reader wondering about the outcome, a wonderful build up to this ending, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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An excellent read, "and licked her lipw" "She would wanted answers from"
a couple of typos here, I really like the way you have left the reader wondering about the outcome, a wonderful build up to this ending, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thanks for the corrections. I will edit.
Comment from Teri7
and licked her lipw.
(lips)
She would wanted answers from Robert.
(delete would)
This is very interesting. When you fix these two errors please let me know and I will review again. I enjoyed reading this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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and licked her lipw.
(lips)
She would wanted answers from Robert.
(delete would)
This is very interesting. When you fix these two errors please let me know and I will review again. I enjoyed reading this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thanks for the corrections. I have edited.