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They Pollinate Plant Life

A pi formatted poem

13 total reviews 
Comment from June Sargent
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I enjoyed both the subject matter - I love butterflies! And the format. I did write a pi poem once - think I might try to write another. Thanks for this lovely inspiring poem! The words flowed with great rhythm.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much for your lovely review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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So true of many of Nature's creatures that enhance our lives, they also have a purpose. This is another lovely poem about the beautiful butterflies, Patricia. Nicely done,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024


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Comment from lyenochka
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Your love for butterflies really comes through in this Pi poem, Patricia! Yes, we are blessed that God created these beautiful butterflies for us to admire as they help pollinate. Some start out as caterpillars which also destroy plants. Probably a side effect of the fall.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
    With gratitude of my heart, I wish to thank you for a very nice review
Comment from jim vecchio
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Thanks for another wonderful poem starring those beautiful butterflies. Of course, you continue to excel with the pi poem. Your poetic words always compliment these most beautiful of God's creatures.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
    Thank you so much for stopping by. Really appreciate it.
reply by jim vecchio on 16-Dec-2024
    As I appreciate your writing.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I very much enjoyed reading this poem. How can one not enjoy a poem filled with butterflies and a reminder of God. Not only that the poem flows so smoothly. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
    I am always grateful when I get nice reviews like this
Comment from RJ Heritage
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God in His wisdom made these pollinators and gave them a unique beauty. Butterflies are one of my most sought and watched creatures, I absolutely adore them
I even loie the moths.
Beautiful.
RJ

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. I appreciate
reply by RJ Heritage on 13-Dec-2024
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I adore the butterflies and we won't be seeing much of them for the next few months. I rarely see a butterfly in the Canaries, but there are many dragonflies and they are huge! I enjoyed your lighthearted flutter here Patricia, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024


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    Thank you for taking the time to reading my work. I appreciate it
Comment from fm wright
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You relate so much in this poem. The formula for pi seems to work well in how your thoughts were expressed. The words seem to flow, much like a butterfly in flight. The image is quite lovely.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024


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Comment from Carol Clark2
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I like the varied descriptions of the butterfly's wings -- gossamer, velvety, fragile, purposeful. The picture is so pretty, and the presentation is nice. I appreciate the larger text font also. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
    Thank you for stopping by reading and review of my work it is
reply by Carol Clark2 on 14-Dec-2024
    My pleasure. I always enjoy your beautiful butterfly pictures. Have a blessed week. Carol
Comment from Peter Jarvis
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Your Pi poem is delightful! The way you've captured the delicate beauty and purpose of butterflies is both graceful and enchanting. The structure of the poem, following the digits of Pi, adds an interesting and unique dimension to your piece. It's a wonderful example of how mathematical precision can blend seamlessly with the poetic form.

Your imagery of butterflies carrying pollen and contributing to the cycle of life is beautifully portrayed. Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
    A thank you for your very kind review. I appreciate it.