Sunset at 5:30
a sacred time4 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
I could plant my feet in the sand and sit and stare at the setting sun everyday. It's such a beautiful site, inspiring us to be thankful for the day, yet promising to return tomorrow. Gorgeous!
Smiles, Carol
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I could plant my feet in the sand and sit and stare at the setting sun everyday. It's such a beautiful site, inspiring us to be thankful for the day, yet promising to return tomorrow. Gorgeous!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from Peter Jarvis
Your 2-4-2 poem perfectly captures the brief, yet magical moment of twilight. The simplicity and elegance of your words paint a vivid picture of the evening's transition. It's a beautiful reflection of nature's daily routine.
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Your 2-4-2 poem perfectly captures the brief, yet magical moment of twilight. The simplicity and elegance of your words paint a vivid picture of the evening's transition. It's a beautiful reflection of nature's daily routine.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from Lana Marie
Will I learn something reading your entry for the contest. I did not know what gloaming meant. I really like the picture that you used in the words go so well with it. Thank you for teaching me something new well reviewing your poem.
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Will I learn something reading your entry for the contest. I did not know what gloaming meant. I really like the picture that you used in the words go so well with it. Thank you for teaching me something new well reviewing your poem.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow... those were the days! (wink, wink).... It's dark here by 5:30 this days (a bit chilly too!).... but a great 2-4-2 for the contest! :-) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
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Wow... those were the days! (wink, wink).... It's dark here by 5:30 this days (a bit chilly too!).... but a great 2-4-2 for the contest! :-) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024