Comment from Gunner Lil

Average

A good enough picture but getting off a bus would have been better.
More passion in this story would have been a winner this reader thinks.
Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

I liked it.
and I know it didn't happen on that day however as it is read (by me) as if it occurred right away, Was she a mail-order bride?
Oh well. Be well.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024

no she was just the girl of my dreams. I first dreamt of meeting her in 1974 and she walked off a bus into my life in 1982.

Comment from Lana Marie

Excellent

Awe yes! Fate! When it's meant to be, it'll be, and it's amazing how lives lineup for an unexpected encounter. But then it's time to put the work in to continue that relationship after fate introduced them. They look like a happy couple. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Oh, what a wonderful little romantic touch for the this contest... even more so since it's true!! :) Be sure to print it up and put her pic on it and give it to her!! Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024

thanks a lot