Comment from Darlene BoClair

Excellent

Funny now I wonder if you are reading the comic section of your local daily morning newspaper. The newspaper is enough to make you laugh without spelling coffee all over the table. The perfect contest entry Good morning!

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from artisart4u

Excellent

Sir,
I have to say, maybe the coffee was too much.
You have two syllables for line one and three but your line two has four words or six syllables. Is this a funny part due to drinking while you are reading.
The picture as very nice and so is your poem.
Good luck with it.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024

hmm I will fix this now thanks

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL! So, I gotta tell ya, when I first read the title on the 'bonus reviewing listing' (before the actual page and poem appeared), I was expecting something unusual/surprising to happen while 'reading and while drinking'... but still a good offering for the contest as it certainly lets the mind of the reader wander!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024

thanks a lot