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Screams of the Shadows

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In the dark, the screams never stop.

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Comment from papa55mike
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That's an interesting ending and epilogue. There's always a catch to create more stories. What a wonderfully written chapter. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2024

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Only momentary relief.... I am not sure I could live through eighteen more chapters of running, being chased, and running some more. You did a terrific job, Marilyn. Is your heart racing as fast as mine?
Smiles, Carol

Come read some Christmas stories to calm yourself....

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2024