I Want
a 2-6-2 poem3 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Not sure, but seems to read such that 'make' should be 'makes'... Thank you for sharing your short-form offering and best of luck in the contest today!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Not sure, but seems to read such that 'make' should be 'makes'... Thank you for sharing your short-form offering and best of luck in the contest today!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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No ,," make " without the s is right .
I want her heat.
Make her heart skip a beat
And tweet.
Comment from Peter Jarvis
You've nailed the 2-6-2 structure with this poem! The brevity and rhythm create a captivating moment that leaves a strong impression. Poetry like this can be incredibly powerful in its simplicity.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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You've nailed the 2-6-2 structure with this poem! The brevity and rhythm create a captivating moment that leaves a strong impression. Poetry like this can be incredibly powerful in its simplicity.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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It bombed in the booth , zero votes, so your words of praise for my wee poem is much appreciated.
Keep safe!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 2-6-2, I Want, has the proper formatting and lets the readers know that the passion and drive to conquer another's heart is still alive and well in the world.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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This 2-6-2, I Want, has the proper formatting and lets the readers know that the passion and drive to conquer another's heart is still alive and well in the world.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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I appreciate that you took the time to read my wee poem and post a comment.