To Love
2/6/2 poem13 total reviews
Comment from Trina Layne
This was fantastic. What a short-form gem! It was simple but poignant, expressive and clear. Congratulations on your writing and all the best to you.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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This was fantastic. What a short-form gem! It was simple but poignant, expressive and clear. Congratulations on your writing and all the best to you.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you for this wonderful "exceptional" I am honored.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem says so much. I love how you capture such a deep truth in just a few words. The idea of rising above ego feels so true. Your choice to keep it minimal makes it hit even harder. Beautifully done!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Your poem says so much. I love how you capture such a deep truth in just a few words. The idea of rising above ego feels so true. Your choice to keep it minimal makes it hit even harder. Beautifully done!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much for this very thoughtful review.
Comment from June Sargent
So true! It means thinking less of one's self and more about the other. Otherwise, it's all take with no give in a relationship that would be doomed from the start. Wise advice in just a few words.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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So true! It means thinking less of one's self and more about the other. Otherwise, it's all take with no give in a relationship that would be doomed from the start. Wise advice in just a few words.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the lovely review. Yes, ego is a killer
Comment from jaded831
What a great poem. It teaches without being preachy. Forgiveness begins by putting ego aside and love takes the lead. I wish the world could read your poem. It would be a better place.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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What a great poem. It teaches without being preachy. Forgiveness begins by putting ego aside and love takes the lead. I wish the world could read your poem. It would be a better place.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Such a lovely and well thought review. Thank you for the "exceptional " rating. All the best Val
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is so cute! I love it! Not sure how you got it so small and pocket-sized but it works perfectly. The message is clear that there simply isn't room for anyone else when self-love dominates. Well done and good luck! A strong contender:) Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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This is so cute! I love it! Not sure how you got it so small and pocket-sized but it works perfectly. The message is clear that there simply isn't room for anyone else when self-love dominates. Well done and good luck! A strong contender:) Debbie
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have three votes!
Love is all about giving, being there for others.
Those who are self centred can never really love , it's all about their needs first.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have three votes!
Love is all about giving, being there for others.
Those who are self centred can never really love , it's all about their needs first.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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I am so thankful, for that vote. Sometimes these short contests are more about prsentations, than the words written. I am also grarteful for the review. Italian???
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Your words carried an important truth.
Yes 🇮🇹 😐
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Mystery Poet,
If a relationship is going to endure, you must put your all into it. The love you receive is directly related to the love you give.
If you only love yourself, the relationship will fail. It's lop-sided.
Nicely penned for the 2-6-2 poetry contest! Good Luck!
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Hi Mystery Poet,
If a relationship is going to endure, you must put your all into it. The love you receive is directly related to the love you give.
If you only love yourself, the relationship will fail. It's lop-sided.
Nicely penned for the 2-6-2 poetry contest! Good Luck!
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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This is such a lovely and well thought review. Rare anymore on this sight. Thank you for time.
Comment from Avery Daniel
Wow! This is a hauntingly good 2-6-2 poem. You used each and every word with resounding tact and placement. This may be the greatest short verse poem I've ever read. Congrats, you have just written a "banger" as my brother and I would say.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Wow! This is a hauntingly good 2-6-2 poem. You used each and every word with resounding tact and placement. This may be the greatest short verse poem I've ever read. Congrats, you have just written a "banger" as my brother and I would say.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Well, make my day! An "exceptional" and I've written a "banger," what more could I ask for. Thank you for ALL your kind words. I am honored.
Comment from Darlene BoClair
I love this style of poetry. So short and romantic. Just the right amount amount amount of words to express to the one you so love.
Happy Holidays!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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I love this style of poetry. So short and romantic. Just the right amount amount amount of words to express to the one you so love.
Happy Holidays!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
An interesting perspective presented here... certainly is food for thought. Thank you for sharing your short-form offering and best of luck in the contest today!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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An interesting perspective presented here... certainly is food for thought. Thank you for sharing your short-form offering and best of luck in the contest today!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the review