BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Puffy Winter Coat"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
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Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh what a glorious picture of our revered cardinal!! ;) Absolutely love your addition to the RENGA today, Lady June! ;) Thanx for sharing such a wonderful smile wrapped in a red puffy coat! ;) Yvette
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Oh what a glorious picture of our revered cardinal!! ;) Absolutely love your addition to the RENGA today, Lady June! ;) Thanx for sharing such a wonderful smile wrapped in a red puffy coat! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent chapter for our renga book. Thank you for participating. Good follow-up to Alexa Trovato's 5/7/5 syllables. Good count and connections between lines. You created a beautiful presentation and word imagery.
Well done!
Gypsy
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Excellent chapter for our renga book. Thank you for participating. Good follow-up to Alexa Trovato's 5/7/5 syllables. Good count and connections between lines. You created a beautiful presentation and word imagery.
Well done!
Gypsy
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
Comment from kahpot
I think it is amazing that critters and creatures have all these protective mechanisms to endure all weather, a wonderful addition to the renga book, very well written and presented****kahpot
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I think it is amazing that critters and creatures have all these protective mechanisms to endure all weather, a wonderful addition to the renga book, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
This is a nice addition to this Renga collaboration.
Consider cloak instead coat, which is what cardinals often wear for their ecclesiastic rituals.
Mark
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June,
This is a nice addition to this Renga collaboration.
Consider cloak instead coat, which is what cardinals often wear for their ecclesiastic rituals.
Mark
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love this poem. The image of the cardinal in a puffy winter coat so so charming. And it perfectly captures the spirit of weathering a storm. Your ability to share this with just a few words is impressive! Keep up the great work!
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I love this poem. The image of the cardinal in a puffy winter coat so so charming. And it perfectly captures the spirit of weathering a storm. Your ability to share this with just a few words is impressive! Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
June,
A nice Renga poem for a sweet bird!
I've only seen a few cardinals in my lifetime, and when I did, I marveled at their bright, vivid coloring.
It's also nice to know I'll have company on these dreary days, because cardinals don't migrate.
Blessings,
Cindy
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June,
A nice Renga poem for a sweet bird!
I've only seen a few cardinals in my lifetime, and when I did, I marveled at their bright, vivid coloring.
It's also nice to know I'll have company on these dreary days, because cardinals don't migrate.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024