Foxy
an unexpected encounter7 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
Foxy indeed! This is a great entry for the contest that met the requirements, but led us onto an unexpected path of romance - budding young love, as opposed to an old couple reminiscing about their footprints being left behind on the snowy road of life. I enjoyed the read. Fresh and fun.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Foxy indeed! This is a great entry for the contest that met the requirements, but led us onto an unexpected path of romance - budding young love, as opposed to an old couple reminiscing about their footprints being left behind on the snowy road of life. I enjoyed the read. Fresh and fun.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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I am delighted you enjoyed my shortie. Many thanks for your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A clever little story in which an outing to track the activities of a fox leads to another encounter with a foxy lady of another kind. And footsteps in the snow led the narrator to this delightfully romantic reunion. Your story is well structured and composed and a joy to read. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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A clever little story in which an outing to track the activities of a fox leads to another encounter with a foxy lady of another kind. And footsteps in the snow led the narrator to this delightfully romantic reunion. Your story is well structured and composed and a joy to read. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie, for your kind praise of my story. Rod
Comment from Slo_6
Nice little meet cute, but I want to know if she got carded or not. I feel like this could use something extra in the last line, and that open question is a good possibility for an extra twist.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Nice little meet cute, but I want to know if she got carded or not. I feel like this could use something extra in the last line, and that open question is a good possibility for an extra twist.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
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Thank you, SLO 6, for reading my story and commenting on the ending. The story is based on a real experience. We were both carded and refused admittance into one casino but sneaked into another. Rod
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Certainly a fun and light romantic take on this writing challenge... well done, mystery author! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;)
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Certainly a fun and light romantic take on this writing challenge... well done, mystery author! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) ;)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed my shortie.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This surprise encounter turned out to be a pleasant one here and I enjoyed your story as when I began reading it I had no idea what a sweet and endearing tale it would be, I enjoyed the ride, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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This surprise encounter turned out to be a pleasant one here and I enjoyed your story as when I began reading it I had no idea what a sweet and endearing tale it would be, I enjoyed the ride, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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I am delighted you enjoyed my shortie, Dolly. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed your story. The way you built the tension with Petey's responses really drew me in. I loved the exchange between them. I thought the "Foxy Lady" line brought a lighthearted touch to the moment. Your descriptions were perfect. It was a fun read and I can't wait to hear more of Petey's story!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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I really enjoyed your story. The way you built the tension with Petey's responses really drew me in. I loved the exchange between them. I thought the "Foxy Lady" line brought a lighthearted touch to the moment. Your descriptions were perfect. It was a fun read and I can't wait to hear more of Petey's story!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Michael. Writing this was fun. So pleased you enjoyed the exchange.
Comment from royowen
I can remember pretty girls like that, I occasionally got on well with them, but they were snapped up by guys who were steadier than I, I love this, it brought back pleasant memories, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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I can remember pretty girls like that, I occasionally got on well with them, but they were snapped up by guys who were steadier than I, I love this, it brought back pleasant memories, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Roy, I am pleased my story brought back memories. So did writing it. Thank you!
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Good job