Screams of the Shadows
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "The Reckoning"In the dark, the screams never stop.
2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This chapter builds perfectly on the tension from the previous chapter. I love how you've given the Key a personality of sorts. Ending with her stepping toward the pedestal is brilliant. It leaves me very curious about what comes next. Excellent pacing!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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This chapter builds perfectly on the tension from the previous chapter. I love how you've given the Key a personality of sorts. Ending with her stepping toward the pedestal is brilliant. It leaves me very curious about what comes next. Excellent pacing!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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it's time to end it
Comment from Begin Again
Marilyn! How dare you! LOL You said it was over...yet here is poor Sarah having to make a decision again. I'm not sure I have the strength for all this. You've done an excellent job.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Marilyn! How dare you! LOL You said it was over...yet here is poor Sarah having to make a decision again. I'm not sure I have the strength for all this. You've done an excellent job.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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it's time
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Hope you can catch a few of my Christmas stories....
