Screams of the Shadows
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "The Choice"In the dark, the screams never stop.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your chapter pulled me in immediately! The tension you created was so gripping. I felt Sarah's fear and her desperation in every word. I loved how the messages on the phone added more uncertainty. The ending was perfect. Beautifully done!
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Your chapter pulled me in immediately! The tension you created was so gripping. I felt Sarah's fear and her desperation in every word. I loved how the messages on the phone added more uncertainty. The ending was perfect. Beautifully done!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
Comment from Begin Again
The voice says it's over, but is it? How can Sarah just walk away from all the terror that was reaped upon her without knowing what the case was all about? she didn't leave it behind....so maybe she'll get her answers.
Smiles, Carol
Miss you over in my corner...Hope you come back soon.
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The voice says it's over, but is it? How can Sarah just walk away from all the terror that was reaped upon her without knowing what the case was all about? she didn't leave it behind....so maybe she'll get her answers.
Smiles, Carol
Miss you over in my corner...Hope you come back soon.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
