Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Your story was incredible! I was hooked from the start. The connection between you and Dutch felt so genuine. And the twist with the icy javelin was shocking. This was a wonderful read and I loved the ending!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
Comment from
Y. M. Roger
Well, that was certainly unexpected... definitely a twist that catches the reader off-guard! Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024