Can This Be Happening?
We remember this feeling2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I love how your poem captures the connection between the boy and the baby. The image of the boy and baby together really shares the feeling of closeness. It's a beautiful, heartfelt moment, and your poem brings it to life so well!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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I love how your poem captures the connection between the boy and the baby. The image of the boy and baby together really shares the feeling of closeness. It's a beautiful, heartfelt moment, and your poem brings it to life so well!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Michael. I am pleased that things blended well.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A fun take here on the idea of the human relationships that seem to have a bit of a rocky start... Great use of this challenging short form! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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A fun take here on the idea of the human relationships that seem to have a bit of a rocky start... Great use of this challenging short form! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your kind words. Yes the intent was just as you captured it.