2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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8 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
I like the cozy feeling your poem brings.
When all my siblings and their families came home for Christmas, we'd sit by our fireplace and reminisce.
Nice photo. Great poem, Gypsy.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Gypsy,
I like the cozy feeling your poem brings.
When all my siblings and their families came home for Christmas, we'd sit by our fireplace and reminisce.
Nice photo. Great poem, Gypsy.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
Very reflective words th as t share the joys of family relationship. I also remember some close and good times of the season. Thank you so much for sharing. Top of the morning to you.
RJ
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Very reflective words th as t share the joys of family relationship. I also remember some close and good times of the season. Thank you so much for sharing. Top of the morning to you.
RJ
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Wow, you really hit one something that resonates with people here and they are all happy to participate! Thanks for doing the book!
This picture is cute. Is the mom holding a baby under the blanket? That looks like such a good time and love is "kindled" in their hearts!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Wow, you really hit one something that resonates with people here and they are all happy to participate! Thanks for doing the book!
This picture is cute. Is the mom holding a baby under the blanket? That looks like such a good time and love is "kindled" in their hearts!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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I don't think so but you may be right. I didn't notice it before.
Thank you very much, big sister. 😊 I appreciate your excellent review.
Love
Marival
Comment from kahpot
Yes, I remember such stories, yes, I have read so many poems for the renga book, it is hard to keep up with what is needed next, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Yes, I remember such stories, yes, I have read so many poems for the renga book, it is hard to keep up with what is needed next, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I felt warm and cosy before even reading your fine verse. But now I feel particularly toasty. The third line is beautifully evocative. Thanks for sharing. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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I felt warm and cosy before even reading your fine verse. But now I feel particularly toasty. The third line is beautifully evocative. Thanks for sharing. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Nothing is more fun or can even be romantic that sitting by a fireplace or outside by a firepit with loved ones sharing stories or just being together. Thank you for sharing this moment with us.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Nothing is more fun or can even be romantic that sitting by a fireplace or outside by a firepit with loved ones sharing stories or just being together. Thank you for sharing this moment with us.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Begin Again
I'm not a poet but I must say that I have read a lot of these renga's and enjoyed them. They are short but usually colorful and leaves the reader to imagine the scene.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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I'm not a poet but I must say that I have read a lot of these renga's and enjoyed them. They are short but usually colorful and leaves the reader to imagine the scene.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
i've noticed that! can't write that fast!! LOL!
this was a great winter haiku
and the satori is awesome!!
cool imagery and smooth flow
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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i've noticed that! can't write that fast!! LOL!
this was a great winter haiku
and the satori is awesome!!
cool imagery and smooth flow
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy hugs