Comment from Thesis

Excellent

Very creative, I believe this would certainly change the ways of many on the Naughty list if it were true. It's a sad commentary on humanity. Just the fact that they have evolved to be ungrateful, disgusting beings, and the way Santa reacts to their behavior, should be a lesson to us all.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024

Thank you for the great review, Thesis. Yes, it's sad how the world's becoming. I really appreciate the stars and stop in, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great
Christmas.

Ron

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I really like how you've taken the classic Christmas story and given it a dark twist! The idea of Santa ready to punish the naughty is fantastic. It really grabs attention and keeps you hooked with every line. Your writing style creates a world that's chilling but also so exciting.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This sounds like a very good strategy to me. Why there has to be a naughty and a nice list I'm not sure, but the naughty list needs to become nice, and really it's just decision, free will you know, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024