Comment from
Lea Tonin1
There you go giving me the Eb GB's again. This awesome chapter the web tightens. Poor Aliss, she has a headache coming her way and she wakes up. Your writing is quite unique. Descriptive, full of information. I'm very well-thought-out. This is the big depression.I get put your heart and your time in this! There is only one remedy for this fine piece of literature!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
Thank you for your review! AND STARS!
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Your story really pulled me in from the start! I loved how you created such a tense atmosphere. could practically feel Aliss's fear and determination. I was completely captivated by the tension between her and her captor.
Your story had me rooting for Aliss all the way. Great job!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024