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Giraffe World Cup

gifted graceful giraffes gather to play soccer match

3 total reviews 
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Well somebody certainly had a whirlwind romance with the letter 'g' here... or was it just the alluring looks of the giraffe, hmmm? :-) :-) Definitely a fun offering for the contest here ... Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest! ;)

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2024

Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Your poem is so full of charm! I love how you brought the giraffes to life with their gangly grace and joyful gathering. :) The alliteration with "g" adds such fun. I could clearly picture them galloping and enjoying their day. Your creativity shines through - such a delightful read!

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2024

Comment from Peter Jarvis
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Your haiku series is charming and whimsical, painting a delightful picture of giraffes in a playful and graceful setting. The alliteration with "g" sounds creates a rhythmic and joyful tone throughout the poems. The imagery of giraffes dancing, galloping, and even playing soccer under the golden glow is enchanting and brings a smile to the reader's face.
Love it

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2024