My heart skips a beat
Upon seeing a beautiful woman2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed how your poem captures that feeling. The repeated "My heart skips a beat" ties everything together beautifully. The playful lines "I'm willing to cheat" and "I'm white as a sheet" add such a fun. This was a joy to read. Keep up the great work!
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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I really enjoyed how your poem captures that feeling. The repeated "My heart skips a beat" ties everything together beautifully. The playful lines "I'm willing to cheat" and "I'm white as a sheet" add such a fun. This was a joy to read. Keep up the great work!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Thanks, Michael.
Comment from Peter Jarvis
his poem is beautifully crafted and captures the intensity of romantic longing. The repetition of "My heart skips a beat" adds a rhythmic cadence that emphasizes the speaker's emotional turmoil and excitement. Each stanza builds on this theme, painting a vivid picture of admiration and desire.
The imagery is striking and the language is both tender and passionate. The progression from longing to a hopeful encounter is well-executed, culminating in a heart-pounding finale.
What a stunning picture!
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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his poem is beautifully crafted and captures the intensity of romantic longing. The repetition of "My heart skips a beat" adds a rhythmic cadence that emphasizes the speaker's emotional turmoil and excitement. Each stanza builds on this theme, painting a vivid picture of admiration and desire.
The imagery is striking and the language is both tender and passionate. The progression from longing to a hopeful encounter is well-executed, culminating in a heart-pounding finale.
What a stunning picture!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thanks, Peter.