Her special swan
Memorial poem3 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful tribute to both your Grandma and your Grandpa and to all the souls that left this world leaving so many others behind... Well done for the contest here. Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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A beautiful tribute to both your Grandma and your Grandpa and to all the souls that left this world leaving so many others behind... Well done for the contest here. Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much
Comment from royowen
My dad was at Dunkirk in northern France at the beginning of the conflict in WW2 when 300,000 British soldiers were evacuated, he survived, but was rendered deaf because of the bombs. Beautifully and memorably written my friend, beautifully piece of writing, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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My dad was at Dunkirk in northern France at the beginning of the conflict in WW2 when 300,000 British soldiers were evacuated, he survived, but was rendered deaf because of the bombs. Beautifully and memorably written my friend, beautifully piece of writing, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you for a wonderful review Roy
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Well done
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed your poem. The way you describe your Nana's love story is beautiful. I can feel the weight of her memories in each line. The writing is excellent. Especially like "oceans of tears inside each one" which hit me hard in the best way. Your poem feels full of warmth and it's clear how much this story means to you. Keep sharing such heartfelt writing - it's really moving!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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I really enjoyed your poem. The way you describe your Nana's love story is beautiful. I can feel the weight of her memories in each line. The writing is excellent. Especially like "oceans of tears inside each one" which hit me hard in the best way. Your poem feels full of warmth and it's clear how much this story means to you. Keep sharing such heartfelt writing - it's really moving!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Thank you much, for such a nice review Michael