Christmas Assailant
Evil does not take a holiday.5 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I'm not sure how snow would "murder lovers" but it's hard to convey much in such a brief form. Yet evil lurks all the time and especially during the stressful holidays, perhaps it happens more. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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I'm not sure how snow would "murder lovers" but it's hard to convey much in such a brief form. Yet evil lurks all the time and especially during the stressful holidays, perhaps it happens more. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Fair points. Thanks for reading it and sharing your review.
Comment from royowen
I must admit I never quite thought of snow in that way at all, but I do love I'm a country where it never snows except in the mountains. Beautifully written my friend, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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I must admit I never quite thought of snow in that way at all, but I do love I'm a country where it never snows except in the mountains. Beautifully written my friend, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Feedback received and appreciated.
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I welcome
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Okay a dark twist on the holidays here... but funny and grin-worthy nonetheless! ;) Thanx so much for sharing your pen and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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LOL! Okay a dark twist on the holidays here... but funny and grin-worthy nonetheless! ;) Thanx so much for sharing your pen and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thanks for the love.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so beautiful. It is packed with emotion in just a few words. The difference between the purity of snow and the depth of its betrayal is so powerful. I love how you've given snow such a sinister weight! A well written poem.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Your poem is so beautiful. It is packed with emotion in just a few words. The difference between the purity of snow and the depth of its betrayal is so powerful. I love how you've given snow such a sinister weight! A well written poem.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Appreciated.
Comment from Rick Gardner
Never thought snow an murder would be used in the same poem. Snow could kill if it caught you unawares but can't call that murder. Am I missing something here? Sorry for your loss.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Never thought snow an murder would be used in the same poem. Snow could kill if it caught you unawares but can't call that murder. Am I missing something here? Sorry for your loss.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Noted with thanks, Rick.
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We have the same thoughts, is that good or bad?