Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi Poetwatch.
This is a well done poem for the club. It tells of your faith and what it does for you and the peace it brings.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Merry Christmas.
Joan

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you, Joan. :) May you and yours have a Merry Christmas.

reply by dragonpoet on 18-Dec-2024

My pleasure, poetwatch.
Joan

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

Nicely done with your Insane Cinquain, as you sing and 'praise my God' and the beauty of creation. Your poem has a lovely, uplifting feel to it. Well written, Poetwatch. cheers

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024

Thank you, Pear. :) I happy you felt the warmth and love. :)

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

good insane cinquain
smooth rhyme and flow
comforting word choices
and thought-provoking message...

thank you for participating and sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024

Thank you, Shelly. :) Happy are they that smiled and felt the warmth of love.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very well written poem for the club event and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your presentation is lovely. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you. Merry Christmas. Patricia.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024

Thank you, Patricia. :) May you have happiness every day and Merry Christmas.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Wow! That is certainly an insane form, sir ... but what a beautiful hymn of praise and testimony you have written with it!! :-) Thanx so much for sharing your blessed pen this morning, Jose -- love the light you've shined today! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024

Thank you, Yvette. :) The light is for your smile.

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

As I've said before, your poetry has reached a new height with these prompts you take from the club.

This one shows us your faith and your beliefs, and is full of love. Well done, Jose.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024

Thak you, Pam. :) Love and light is for your smile.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I enjoyed your tuneful tribute to your faith here as your words resonate with me, your warmhearted presentation for the Potlatch Poetry Club is much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x x x

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024

Thak you, Dolly. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it, for the light comes from your smile.

Comment from lyenochka

Exceptional

A beautiful "insane" cinquain which gives us a wonderful praise poem. May we keep praising God and keep learning how to live in God's love so that our melodies harmonize with heaven.
How is Sara doing? Please keep me posted.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024

Thank you, Helen. :) If you smiled then I'm happy, for I done good.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I really love how your poem shares such warmth. The way you describe the light of God's creation is so beautiful. Your words feel like a heartfelt song of gratitude to God! It's such a peaceful and uplifting piece.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024

Micheal, I happy you felt the warmth and love. :) Thank you. :)