Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I fear in the US we have forgotten who our enemies are and have forgotten history. You have sent a strong reminder to us. He have also taken God out of our lives. The people who still believe and worship are made fun of. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2021

Comment from Bloomer Burbs

Excellent

Hi ALCREATOR LITT DEAR

Another of your grand and flamboyant poem.
I'm not sure one the following bit means?

"Suvan Allah, Allah Suvan,
Great Allah, Mian Allah,
Aren't you proud of our mission?"

Take care there. Pete

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2021

Comment from CP!

Excellent

This poem was very good. The one reason why I am not giving it 6 stars is that I think this poem is more of a story than a poem. However, good job on this.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2021

Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

This is a very vivid and exploratory work on the many sides of a sad set of events. I had to read it twice to even pick out the high points...your writing is complex and must be approached with a diligent mind. It is written in a way that makes the reader think.

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2021

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

You have come out with an interesting idea of telling a horror story in script form,. The conversations in the local language make it believable. It reads like a surreal story that is difficult to grasp for me living in India and you have unfolded the horror before everyone's eyes. Good effort!

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2021

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This one deed alone goes down in history as the worst terrorise attack in the world and the whole world is still grieving and reeling from such a heartless, deadly and underhanded terror. And all it achieved is grief and sympathy for the innocent who died and showed the world the true colours of hatred. I was not sure of the meaning of some of your poem but I believe it is good natured, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2021

Comment from Sandra C. Johnston

Excellent

I believe that you have accomplished your purpose to relay evil incarnate. It was difficult to get the gist sometimes because your references are difficult for a lay reader to understand. I had to read it a few times to follow the flow... not that there was one. I had to read your explanations in order to appreciate what you were exposing...very dark indeed. The vernacular was revealing for me. I had to stay curious and look up a few things but that is not a bad thing. Keep writing and stay in the light.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

Comment from royowen

Excellent

The day of the twin towers was incredibly surreal, but the reality of it all, was difficult to grasp, but yet, there is was unfolding before our very eyes, the demise of these two monetary symbols, which ironically symbolises America, hence the attack I suspect, well done, beautifully written blessings Roy

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

Comment from Eunice Amero

Good

I'm not sure how to rate you. Are you against what happened in New York or for it? It was a terrible day when those tourist people did what they did. Not sure how to express myself. It was an awful day and killed many.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2021

Thank you at least you tried to read only two or three lines of the long poem and wrote something silly, at the outset I write you are not eligible to review this work for I clearly mentioned in my Author Notes, as it is evident you have only written and posted two works in 4 years of your Fanstory membership, and you have written something so controversial and wrong and I am sure, you have just tried to earn some cents or dollars and wrote only the derogatory words without reading the work; just you re-read your own words which you wish to call or make or describe or define as your review:
Eunice Amero
8 hours ago

Review For Con Joy!
Chapter 14 of the book Oh Life!
Good

I'm not sure how to rate you. Are you against what happened in New York or for it? It was a terrible day when those tourist people did what they did. Not sure how to express myself. It was an awful day and killed many.
How dare you write such a derogatory word? Where did you get it? Just explain me, refer to the line or lines reading which you developed such a silly idea, concept, thought about a writer. Please do not write such a silly word that really attacks a writer.

You have no time to read Author Notes. I clearly mentioned about the work.

Please read this Author Notes to save our priceless resources and to save our precious time



Premier Author Members of Fanstory for years, published many posts at Fanstory are cordially invited to review my works at Fanstory



Please read this work slow and orderly and freely for I have deliberately used many and many sentences or lines of the poem with twisted order of expression; this is a telephonic conversation between two terrorist partners or devils or world's con men and how they are enjoying the devastation and they are expressing their joy on telephone

This work is like an act of Satan, for here I have expressed the viewpoints and joys the terrorist partners (one is master) are getting and continuing their telephonic conversations for sometime, but there is nothing to derogate or hurt anyone who has faith, belief in a specific religion; the act is expressed devastating and how two humanity and civilization banishers, destroyers are enjoying at their devilish, condemning and destructive acts
This is not to hurt anyone to repeat telling about the devastation, this is an imaginary poem to tell about joy that a terrorist or con man or devil feels after the devastation


If you do not like this work on any ground, faith, belief, point etc please escape and leave




It is a self-explanatory, conversational free verse poem in my style, intentional, with no rhyme, metrical or syllable bounds


It speaks the truth in camera, larger and stranger than a fiction; the subject is fictional

It offers con (contra) joy after 9/11; the teller and the listener on the telephone, both feels joy at the happening


The devastation is now a part of World History concerns Humanity, beyond Religions; nothing malicious

So you have not read the clearly written my Author Notes.
You have not even read the work.
How being a Premier Author you wrote such a derogatory word, without reading anything of the work; it is condemnable, and it is sheer negligence in doing a professional job.

Moreover, you have written only a few words in your 4 years of membership and still you have tried to review my work without reading the work.

It is good that you have tried to review a work of this sort of mine on 9/11, but you have deliberately, willingly and desperately wrote two lines so controversially, and not even amateurishly, I find, you assume more, you presume more, you anticipate more, you hope more, you wish more, you read less, you read never minutely, you have no patience to read a work and like a greedy person (I have written and posted here in this book a work ?Greedy?) where I have mentioned clearly, only a foolish man or an unwise person or a fool, or a sheer greedy man comments on anything and everything instantly, quickly like a fool, not innocently like a child, not like a wise man, but a wise man comments only after judging everything, after hours and wisely, truly, practically and positively and not like you, as you have written the comment instantly, without reading the work, how desperate you are!

Just think if I write anything about your work, something so worst, worthless, so non-professionally, so unwisely, something like a foolish, greedy person.

Yes, I can write all these about you.

As you have done such an offensive work.

How can you complain about me, remember, I am a writer/author, I cannot tolerate such an offensive word about my writing.

Read and re-read, read and re-read my Author Notes, how clearly I have mentioned, expressed there the aims, objects, purposes, essence, need and theme of the work.

Please, please, please, never take it at personal level, you have really and truly done a job that none, no author, no writer can tolerate.

You have raised a silly question to a writer by not reading the work and not reading the Author Notes, this is shameful.

You have not expressed your justification of writing such derogatory word without reading the work.

The most offensive part is how you can write a comment without reading the work at least once and without reading such an expressive Author Notes.

I do not like to advice, suggest or recommend you anything, for you have stopped learning, for you think you are the wisest person on this earth.

I do not like to request you to reconsider the rating; I do not accept your review for it is break of my rules, as you have written something is not clear, right, fair, honest and worthy.

Thank you at least you have shown the courage to write a review of my work, but foolishly and not courteously, I mean, you have done a job that shows your wisdom, you are so poor in reviewing, I see, you do this for you have no patience to read and write, like an unwise person, you comment without reading, and based on your sheer foolish assumption; your caliber speaks your words. You are not civilized.

You write only assumed, presumed and foolish words in your comments:
I'm not sure how to rate you. Are you against what happened in New York or for it? It was a terrible day when those tourist people did what they did. Not sure how to express myself. It was an awful day and killed many.

You write you are not sure, why not sure? That means, you have not read the work and instantly you have written your own assumed partial, incomplete thought.
You have written:
Are you against what happened in New York or for it?
How can you write such a line? That means you have not read the work. You have not read the Author Notes.

It was a terrible day when those tourist people did what they did.
How can you write this line? That means you have never read the work. How can you write about the tourists? You assume much, you love to write something not there in the work. That means you have not read and written the line. Is it not derogatory? Is it a civilized act? Is it rational? Is it justifiable? Is it ethical? Is it righteous? Just you think what you have done.

Not sure how to express myself. It was an awful day and killed many.
What is the use of writing this line is it relevant? No, that means you write without reading, which is why you write something not confidently.

Not sure how to express myself.
You being a Premier Writer, you write the line as a reviewer, how silly. You write so, because you have not grown the habit of reading and writing or writing after reading.

What is the use of writing the line? You are writing a question about yourself to a writer and in your review? It is not a wise act. It is rather a childish act on your part.

It was an awful day and killed many
This line is incomplete, inexpressive and not clear. You write wrongly. You have expressed nothing constructively, you have just written some words. Why you have written is not even known to you, in the perspective of my work that if you have even read.
Why you are telling this. Is it a part of review? In review, you are supposed to re-view the work and not to add something what you know and what is not written in the work.

Writing a review does not mean, you write a few words somehow not about the work you read. You have not read the work so it is common and natural that you have written something beyond the work, adding a word about your thought about the subject not about the work, because you have not read the work and you have cared to write something else what you thought at the time of writing something, not writing a re-view. You have not reviewed the work, you cannot for you have not read the work, there is no such work that speaks as proof that you have read the work and you have carefully read the Author Notes.

You have lost the habit of reading that is why you have written something to prove that you are a reviewer.

It was an awful day and killed many.
You are telling a writer about the theme? Why? How can you write this in your review? Is it acceptable to a writer?

Why you write about the event? The work is not about the same you have mentioned. How can you write the right thing, for you had no time to read the work, you were in a hurry to earn by somehow writing a few words and deceiving a writer.

killed many.
Why you have mentioned this? Where have you found this? That means you have not read the work. You write without reading a work and you believe you are a reviewer, how dangerous. You do not know that little learning is dangerous. Your act proves.

Anyway, enough is enough, please do not take it personally, I am not a teacher, I am a writer and a reviewer, so far I have written more than 100,000 reviews and have written more than 100 works, please check my profile; sorry, you do not have time to read and learn, anyway, if you wish to be a writer, I may think you may be a good writer some day, though you have only posted two works in 4 years, I know and believe, you write every day and many and many post and all are yet to be published, yes I have written more than 1000s and those are coming in books, I being a poor unemployed person, I am trying very hard to see me a real published writer, I hope you are trying very hard to be a published author or writer soon.

Wish you every success in your chosen goal,
God bless you,
With the kindest personal regards,
Sincerely yours,
ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
14/06/2021
MONDAY
SICK IN BED DAY
POST CYCLONE JOSH DAY
CLOUDY AND RAINY DAY
PS: Please do not take it personally and feel hurt as I thank you for the review that has taught me so many things and I have written all the words like a fool for I wish to be a wise man some day, but I have written nothing but the truth

reply by Eunice Amero on 14-Jun-2021

I am so sorry if I did you wrong I think it was because I was tired. I will go back and read everything. Thanks

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

This dialogue-based piece captures, in vivid detail, how murderous, psychotic terrorists rejoice and howl like wolves when their actions cause blood to flow and body parts to fly!

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2021