Oh Life!
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Comment from Badger_29
Now I'm convinced that you have a very high IQ, as it was necessary to concoct this work of evil a telephonic conversation between a master and the server of jihad, which I noticed you did not capitalize. But you did capitalize on my attention,although this is a bit longer than some red I plug through it because it all had content important and meaning. The picture was very appropriate.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
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Now I'm convinced that you have a very high IQ, as it was necessary to concoct this work of evil a telephonic conversation between a master and the server of jihad, which I noticed you did not capitalize. But you did capitalize on my attention,although this is a bit longer than some red I plug through it because it all had content important and meaning. The picture was very appropriate.
Blessings,
Brother Badger Cull
Darren
Comment Written 10-Jul-2021
Comment from kahpot
Yes, everybody is apart of history, no matter color or race, thank you for the notes explaining this form of writing, thought it must have been independent, a wonderful read and adage to your book****kahpot
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Yes, everybody is apart of history, no matter color or race, thank you for the notes explaining this form of writing, thought it must have been independent, a wonderful read and adage to your book****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Jul-2021
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a different look at the 9/11horror story. I have never seen one told from the terrorists point of view. I like the use of Arabic and the translations following it. Your words supply strong images
Though I think in a little to repetitive and too long.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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This is a different look at the 9/11horror story. I have never seen one told from the terrorists point of view. I like the use of Arabic and the translations following it. Your words supply strong images
Though I think in a little to repetitive and too long.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2021
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Your chapter in the book Oh Life!
Con Joy!
Alcreator Litt Dear,
At first I had a difficult time to understand what you were saying
Tanks for your authors note it made me sit down and think if you are (in your book) what would take place if ---
if the terrorist or the devil takes out the Joy of living.
Gert
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Your chapter in the book Oh Life!
Con Joy!
Alcreator Litt Dear,
At first I had a difficult time to understand what you were saying
Tanks for your authors note it made me sit down and think if you are (in your book) what would take place if ---
if the terrorist or the devil takes out the Joy of living.
Gert
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
Comment from QC Poet
A terrible crime committed by false or misdirected religious beliefs. History is full of such unfortunate events. Some have lasting effects others get lost to historical footnotes unfortunately.
Thanks for Sharing your tale.
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A terrible crime committed by false or misdirected religious beliefs. History is full of such unfortunate events. Some have lasting effects others get lost to historical footnotes unfortunately.
Thanks for Sharing your tale.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2021
Comment from TPAC
This statement is filled with many thought directed intents, being low man between forces, thinking all sides suck. Allah or God holds this world truth. The players who pretend shall be buried in my opinion. I found many profound conveyances in this write.
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This statement is filled with many thought directed intents, being low man between forces, thinking all sides suck. Allah or God holds this world truth. The players who pretend shall be buried in my opinion. I found many profound conveyances in this write.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
Comment from SeJin Heo
It is interesting to restructure the tragedy in the eye of terrorists. Not only the condolence for victims but understanding of why it happened is critical to prevent evils. The viiolence comes from misunderstandings of power. Your apporach is impressive to reflect on the conflicts of religions. On the other hand, the extreme violence represents the unbalanced power, which resulted from discrimination and exploitation. Therefore, if you refocus on the trap of social justice, it would give us more insights on social violence. Since the poem is so dramatic like reading the climax of novel, the poem is uniquely thrilling. Thank you for reading your poem.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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It is interesting to restructure the tragedy in the eye of terrorists. Not only the condolence for victims but understanding of why it happened is critical to prevent evils. The viiolence comes from misunderstandings of power. Your apporach is impressive to reflect on the conflicts of religions. On the other hand, the extreme violence represents the unbalanced power, which resulted from discrimination and exploitation. Therefore, if you refocus on the trap of social justice, it would give us more insights on social violence. Since the poem is so dramatic like reading the climax of novel, the poem is uniquely thrilling. Thank you for reading your poem.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Comment from Rdfrdmom2
ALCREATOR:
I think the major reason it is so difficult for those of us who are faith-based have such a difficult time dealing with telephonic conversations such as you have written between these two terrorists is we cannot conceive anyone being happy about the number of innocent people killed on 9/11 - then let's go to another country and do it all over again.
Rdfrdmom2
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ALCREATOR:
I think the major reason it is so difficult for those of us who are faith-based have such a difficult time dealing with telephonic conversations such as you have written between these two terrorists is we cannot conceive anyone being happy about the number of innocent people killed on 9/11 - then let's go to another country and do it all over again.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
Comment from Begin Again
What a powerful poem depicting terrorism, the sadistic and malicious side of those who sought to bring America to their knees. We as Americans think of our loss and the terrible act against our country, but the perpetrators found joy and pride in what they did. How sad! thank you for sharing another viewpoint. Carol
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What a powerful poem depicting terrorism, the sadistic and malicious side of those who sought to bring America to their knees. We as Americans think of our loss and the terrible act against our country, but the perpetrators found joy and pride in what they did. How sad! thank you for sharing another viewpoint. Carol
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
Comment from nomi338
Some people do not realize that Allah is a title, just like God is a title. God can be anyone who acts like, considers himself to be or is regarded by followers/worshipers as a God. This does not make this entity Almighty God the creator of all life. The true living God has many titles but only one name. Jehovah's Witnesses believe that the name is Jehovah, translated from Yaweh. The bible states that the world is in the hands of the wicked one, not the true living God. When Jesus was being tempted by Satan who offered him the world's riches, Jesus did not dispute the Devils ability to grant these things. So when people say they worship God, which God do they mean? When they commit acts of extreme violence on behalf of their God, Which God do they reference?
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Some people do not realize that Allah is a title, just like God is a title. God can be anyone who acts like, considers himself to be or is regarded by followers/worshipers as a God. This does not make this entity Almighty God the creator of all life. The true living God has many titles but only one name. Jehovah's Witnesses believe that the name is Jehovah, translated from Yaweh. The bible states that the world is in the hands of the wicked one, not the true living God. When Jesus was being tempted by Satan who offered him the world's riches, Jesus did not dispute the Devils ability to grant these things. So when people say they worship God, which God do they mean? When they commit acts of extreme violence on behalf of their God, Which God do they reference?
Comment Written 29-Jun-2021
