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BOOK OF RENGA POEMS

Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Ellie Meows Content"
Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem

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Comment from Nicki.B
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I'm so sorry to hear Beautiful ginger cat Ellie is no longer with you! Pets become important members of our families that we love and adore. Looks like she loved cuddles on your lap! This is a gorgeous tribute to her and wonderful memories. Well done.
Nicki xox

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much, Nicki

    Gypsy
Comment from royowen
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I think this is the first time I've seen you write about a cat, there are even others that own pets that write their own stories with sublimely gifted typing skills, well done Gypsy, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much, Roy

    Gypsy
reply by royowen on 08-Dec-2024
    Welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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My two boys, I'm sure I've shared about them before, don't enjoy sitting on laps, but beside you and definitely in the sun. LOL Your poem was fun to read and the presentation was great.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara

    Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a nicely written and presented chapter to the book and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I know you probably miss that cat. I wish you a very merry Christmas and may God bless you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much, Patricia

    Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
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pets are awesome!
great 3-line part...
cute and cuddly
just like how the cat looks...

i did keep wanting to put in a pause after 'meows'
(ellie meows -- content)
but that could be just me lol

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley

    Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This will be a winner for the cat-lovers and an excellent subject to capture our need for comfort and warmth in the winter season while searching for that elusive glimmer of sunshine. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much, Debbie

    Gypsy
Comment from BethShelby
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I enjoyed your Renga. I'm sorry to learn Ellie passed away. I have a cat who looks very much like her except mine is gray and very loving on her terms.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much, Beth

    Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for your Ellie poem! She's a pretty kitty and I know your whole family misses her. But you have your sweet puppy now. I liked the "sunbeam spot" which cats are best at finding.

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
    Yes, Muffin is very sweet. The picture is not Ellie. She was grey :)

    Thank you very much, Big Sister

    love,
    marival
Comment from kahpot
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This is a wonderful response, to the one I read about the cats seeking warmth upon the bench, I hope this book is going as well as it reads, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much, Kym

    Gypsy
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I love how you've captured Ellie's peaceful moment in such a sweet way. Your poem really brings to life that feeling of a cat finding the perfect spot to nap. Nicely done!

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 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
    Thank you very much 😊