Trump Returns to Power
Trump returning to power7 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I enjoyed reading Jake. All I can say is looking at his cabinet picks it is going to be a rough ride.
No experience needed. Just be on TV and 100 percent loyal. I imagine the price for selling one's soul is pretty cheap.
Mary
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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I enjoyed reading Jake. All I can say is looking at his cabinet picks it is going to be a rough ride.
No experience needed. Just be on TV and 100 percent loyal. I imagine the price for selling one's soul is pretty cheap.
Mary
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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yeah
Comment from Pearl Edwards
No matter what the rest of the world think, the majority voted him into power. You've used this form well, Jake except for line 4 in stanza 1 you have 8 syllables by my count and it should be 7.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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No matter what the rest of the world think, the majority voted him into power. You've used this form well, Jake except for line 4 in stanza 1 you have 8 syllables by my count and it should be 7.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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thanks I will fix that now
Comment from shelley kaye
president clown and his cabinet of clowns. . . this is going to be bad :-P
a great insane cinquain with an insane star LOL!
good, thought-provoking word choices
on minor rhyme issue
second stanza: should be "d-e-f-d-e"
you have: "d-e-f-d-f"
maybe. . . "Clown show jibe vibe"? or something like that lol
thank you for participating and sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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president clown and his cabinet of clowns. . . this is going to be bad :-P
a great insane cinquain with an insane star LOL!
good, thought-provoking word choices
on minor rhyme issue
second stanza: should be "d-e-f-d-e"
you have: "d-e-f-d-f"
maybe. . . "Clown show jibe vibe"? or something like that lol
thank you for participating and sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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will fix that now
Comment from mrsmajor
Interesting poem...But I choose to wait awhile, before I say all is well...because right now thats not how it looks to me...and I'm not a political person...Its not a matter of "tribes" it's simply a matter of right and wrong...We need a government that's going to work for all the people, not just for a chosen few...
Thanks for sharing, this is a new form, and you used it well...
Victoria
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Interesting poem...But I choose to wait awhile, before I say all is well...because right now thats not how it looks to me...and I'm not a political person...Its not a matter of "tribes" it's simply a matter of right and wrong...We need a government that's going to work for all the people, not just for a chosen few...
Thanks for sharing, this is a new form, and you used it well...
Victoria
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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thanks
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Jake,
I really like this form of poetry "the insane cinquain. Your political poem is straightforward; the last line is the best.
Good luck!
Blessed Christmas,
Cindy
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Jake,
I really like this form of poetry "the insane cinquain. Your political poem is straightforward; the last line is the best.
Good luck!
Blessed Christmas,
Cindy
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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thanks it was fun to write
Comment from lancellot
Good on the form of your poem. The content... Well, you're right, the election is over. And he was president before, and the world didn't end. Our rights were not stripped (no one's). Chaos and flames didn't rule the streets. Seriously, can we just stop with all this now? Are we not rational people, who know what a President can and cannot do, even if he/she were insane. Come on. We are a Republic with a divided government for a reason.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Good on the form of your poem. The content... Well, you're right, the election is over. And he was president before, and the world didn't end. Our rights were not stripped (no one's). Chaos and flames didn't rule the streets. Seriously, can we just stop with all this now? Are we not rational people, who know what a President can and cannot do, even if he/she were insane. Come on. We are a Republic with a divided government for a reason.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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I agree with you. It is not the end of the world yet
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful form, as the syllable count reverses, yes, I think the Americans and indeed the world are in for some changes, but like you said, the people have voted, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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What a wonderful form, as the syllable count reverses, yes, I think the Americans and indeed the world are in for some changes, but like you said, the people have voted, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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thanks a lot