The Day I Came Alive
Christmas poem15 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the joy that Christmas gave you in this well metered and rhymes poem and your chosen words gave me a sense of warm nostalgia Katiemae, a fine poem for the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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I enjoyed the joy that Christmas gave you in this well metered and rhymes poem and your chosen words gave me a sense of warm nostalgia Katiemae, a fine poem for the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Why thanks so very much Dolly for your splendid review and stellar rating! You put a smile on my face.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment from Shanbreen
Love the happy note in which the poem ends.
"This Christmas marks the day I came alive
And now in its enlightenment I'll stay."
Thanks for sharing. All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Love the happy note in which the poem ends.
"This Christmas marks the day I came alive
And now in its enlightenment I'll stay."
Thanks for sharing. All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thanks so very much Shanbreen for your lovely comments and review! Enjoy your holidays!
Luv&stuff
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Katiemae.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You do a good job showing how the
nature of the season influences your feelings.
-I like the line about catching
"the scent of wonder in the air."
-A very good conclusion about
"senses reviving" and how you plan
to keep these feelings and attitude.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
-Wishing the best of the holiday season to you.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation, Katiemae.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You do a good job showing how the
nature of the season influences your feelings.
-I like the line about catching
"the scent of wonder in the air."
-A very good conclusion about
"senses reviving" and how you plan
to keep these feelings and attitude.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.
-Wishing the best of the holiday season to you.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Thanks so very much Pam for your wonderful comments and review!
The best to you this holiday season!
Luv&stuff
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You are very welcome, Katiemae. Thanks for the good wishes, and they are returned to you, too.
Comment from Nicki.B
This is a beautiful poem that I really enjoyed reading. It has great flow and rhyme with meter that flows well off the tongue, you've done a great job! I love your reference to the senses through and feeling and listening to them it real brought the poem alive.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki x
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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This is a beautiful poem that I really enjoyed reading. It has great flow and rhyme with meter that flows well off the tongue, you've done a great job! I love your reference to the senses through and feeling and listening to them it real brought the poem alive.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki x
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thanks so very much Nicki for your wonderful comments and review!
Luv&stuff
Comment from Trina Layne
This is a lovely poem. When I saw the title I was not sure where it would lead. There are some beautiful lines and ideas here. Thanks for sharing your work. I hope to read more of it.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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This is a lovely poem. When I saw the title I was not sure where it would lead. There are some beautiful lines and ideas here. Thanks for sharing your work. I hope to read more of it.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thanks so very much Trina for your lovely comments and review!
Luv&stuff
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Very nicely done. The picture is soft and quiet and filled with wonder. Your words reached my ears I heard miracles in the air. This is a grand thing. I wish you love and joy. Karen
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Very nicely done. The picture is soft and quiet and filled with wonder. Your words reached my ears I heard miracles in the air. This is a grand thing. I wish you love and joy. Karen
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thanks so very much Karen for your lovely comments and stellar review!
I'm so thrilled you liked it!
Luv&stuff
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U R Welcome Karen
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Christmas poetry contest. I might be nisunderstanding but it sounds like you are saying that you found Jesus and became a Christian on Christmas day one year in the past. i apologize if I am getting that wrong. Either way, it is a lovely poem with a great story.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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An excellent entry for the Christmas poetry contest. I might be nisunderstanding but it sounds like you are saying that you found Jesus and became a Christian on Christmas day one year in the past. i apologize if I am getting that wrong. Either way, it is a lovely poem with a great story.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thanks so very much Marilyn. No, the character is already a Christian. That particular Christmas he just re-awakens.
Take care and enjoy your holidays!
Luv&stuff
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh wow!!! Katie, this is a beautiful poem so full of hope. I read your bio, so I see your situation. There are many here that suffer from debilitating illnesses. Your story of hope found in the baby's smile, in Christmas stands as a great inspiration to them. To me as well.
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Oh wow!!! Katie, this is a beautiful poem so full of hope. I read your bio, so I see your situation. There are many here that suffer from debilitating illnesses. Your story of hope found in the baby's smile, in Christmas stands as a great inspiration to them. To me as well.
Best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Thanks so very much Rhonda for your lovely comments and enthusiastic review! The best to you this holiday season!
Luv&stuff
Comment from Begin Again
And the birth of the child brought promise to every living soul, warming their souls and showing them the light that we are promised. Raise up and rejoice and find peace and contentment where once darkness dwelled. BEautiful!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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And the birth of the child brought promise to every living soul, warming their souls and showing them the light that we are promised. Raise up and rejoice and find peace and contentment where once darkness dwelled. BEautiful!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much Carol for your lovely comments and review! Have a merry Christmas!
Luv&stuff
Comment from karenina
Absolutely perfect meter and rhyme work with your fine lines to create as classic a Christmas Poem as I've read in a decade or more!
My senses were fully engaged and you gently urged me to step away from the commercial hustle and hustle of the season and feel the joy of Jesus' birth!
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Absolutely perfect meter and rhyme work with your fine lines to create as classic a Christmas Poem as I've read in a decade or more!
My senses were fully engaged and you gently urged me to step away from the commercial hustle and hustle of the season and feel the joy of Jesus' birth!
Karenina
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thanks so very much karenina for your lovely comments and review! Glad it inspired you to stop and remember the reason for the season.
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Merry Christmas!