Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Hi Gypsy Blue Rose, I really like this poem and the Renga format you have created, but I keep running into a little problem. I do not know if I have misunderstood the format, but here I am counting a 5/9/5 syllable format not a 7/7.
I want to add on, but will wait until I fully understand. Beautiful post.
RJ

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊 it's fixed now.

gypsy

reply by RJ Heritage on 07-Dec-2024

You're welcome
RJ

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

love the imagery of...
tidal memories
flowing away
in winter wind...
just breezing through the mind
a great renga with smooth flow
no spag or typos

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊

gypsy

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Thank you for sharing another of your atmospheric and vividly expressed renga verses. It makes me feel warm and snug even if the wind is howling outside my window! Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊

gypsy

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Very well done, I really like the way this book of renga's is changing course, though this one is getting back to nature again, an excellent 5-7-5 addition, beautifully presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024

Thank you very much 😊

gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I see this is a new poem now so I'll change my review. The winter winds have blown away those warm pleasant times of vacation. But we have the memories to keep us warm at heart.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024

Thank you very much, big sister. I am sorry for the confusion. 😊

love,
marival