Escape
Run away but from what?4 total reviews
Comment from Michele Harber
Eileen, you've pretty much captured every nightmare I've ever had in eight syllables. To answer your question, we're generally running from our own fears and insecurities but, as I've discovered, it's very hard to outrun yourself. It's amazing how much introspection eight syllables can prompt. Nice job.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Eileen, you've pretty much captured every nightmare I've ever had in eight syllables. To answer your question, we're generally running from our own fears and insecurities but, as I've discovered, it's very hard to outrun yourself. It's amazing how much introspection eight syllables can prompt. Nice job.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much. It was intended to create deep thought, and as you mentioned, introspection. message and intent completed!
Thank you for your review.
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My pleasure. You put a lot of pressure on eight little syllables, but they certainly lived up to expectation. 👍
Comment from Lea Tonin1
It is really tough to create an impact itself. Few syllables eight altogether, not a lot. But your poem conveys a message very well! Escape, rain cookie, maybe because I know about that.
I think it's great poem and great entry and well deserved the six. Due to the challenges, this poem presents.You did a great job all the best and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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It is really tough to create an impact itself. Few syllables eight altogether, not a lot. But your poem conveys a message very well! Escape, rain cookie, maybe because I know about that.
I think it's great poem and great entry and well deserved the six. Due to the challenges, this poem presents.You did a great job all the best and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you for kind words
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is short but packs a punch! I love how it captures the intensity of trying to break free in just a few words. The last line - "Escape!" feels like an exclamation mark. It's amazing how much emotion you shared in such a small space.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Your poem is short but packs a punch! I love how it captures the intensity of trying to break free in just a few words. The last line - "Escape!" feels like an exclamation mark. It's amazing how much emotion you shared in such a small space.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate your feedback
Comment from kahpot
Unfortunately, some people are always trying to run away, though find it so hard to escape, hi, I just came across your latest chapter (49/50) I think of your story, and decided to check out your portfolio so I could go back to the beginning, I don't often read stories/prose, but this one intrigued me, it will take me some time, but I will see how it goes, this 2-4-2 poem
is quite powerful, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Unfortunately, some people are always trying to run away, though find it so hard to escape, hi, I just came across your latest chapter (49/50) I think of your story, and decided to check out your portfolio so I could go back to the beginning, I don't often read stories/prose, but this one intrigued me, it will take me some time, but I will see how it goes, this 2-4-2 poem
is quite powerful, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much. I would appreciate any feedback.