Screams of the Shadows
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Into the Abyss"In the dark, the screams never stop.
3 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
I don't know about Sarah but I'm tired of running and falling...someone better be telling me something and doing it soon. The tension is driving me crazy! Great job!
Smiles, Carol
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I don't know about Sarah but I'm tired of running and falling...someone better be telling me something and doing it soon. The tension is driving me crazy! Great job!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
Comment from bob cullen
What a fantastic opening to a novel. Certainly, more than enough to ensure you read the next instalment.
Your writing gripped this reader's attention and left me with more than enough question to guarantee I'll read the next instalment. Is the novel completed, or still in the WIP stages.
Very well written. I like your style and look forward to reading more.
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What a fantastic opening to a novel. Certainly, more than enough to ensure you read the next instalment.
Your writing gripped this reader's attention and left me with more than enough question to guarantee I'll read the next instalment. Is the novel completed, or still in the WIP stages.
Very well written. I like your style and look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
Comment from Gayla putnam
Your descriptions are spot on. I am in the room with Sarah, not knowing whether to believe the phone, the creature, or neither. You created excellent tension. You have a chilling atmosphere, and I anticipate the next installment. gayla
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Your descriptions are spot on. I am in the room with Sarah, not knowing whether to believe the phone, the creature, or neither. You created excellent tension. You have a chilling atmosphere, and I anticipate the next installment. gayla
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
