Comment from Darlene BoClair

Exceptional

Congratulations for entering the 2-4-2 Poetry Contest!
I love your personal romantic writing piece. Having a partner to share sunsets with is beautiful.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024

Thank you very much, Darlene, for your wonderful response to my poem. You just made my day with all those glittering stars and kind words. Rod

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

I like this! It's simply said with 'golden sunsets' a metaphor for growing old and a beautiful visual complementing the evocative verse, An excellent job and great contender! Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024

So pleased you like this one, Debbie, and its metaphor. Many thanks for the kind words. Rod

Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Rod,
This is a lovely 2-4-2 poem. What better way to grow old (mature) gracefully than with someone who loves and understands a person. Vice-versa.
Very well said in five words.
Best wishes, Rod.
Have a blessed Christmas.
Cindy

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024

Thank you so much, Cindy, for the kudos for my shortie. Rod

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the 2-4-2 writing prompt. That sounds like the ideal wish to me. Spending retirement on a warm beach with someone you love. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024

Thank you very much, Marilyn, for sharing and praising my poem.

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Excellent, yes, some of the simplest things can bring the greatest moments and memories, and to have that to share with someone we love is the greatest of all, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024

Thank you very much, kahpot, for sharing and praising my poem.