Comment from
Gayla putnam
I had to read this a bunch of times. I liked the repeated chorus and pre-chorus, though I wish they had been typed out where they belonged. I soldiered through, and after 4 or 5 times, I had the cadence perfect and enjoyed the poem. I like the spotlight invasive and hollow in the brain, Worry about forgetting driving me insane. As I age, that line resounds to me. gayla
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
Comment from
Jesse James Doty
I feel your desperation but the lyrics of this song are uneven and don't flow as a song should. 500 days until Trump becomes president is a concern for everyone who is on his shit list.
Jesse
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
reply by Jesse James Doty on 06-Dec-2024
I'm just being honest, Mike.