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500 Days--Panic Alive

Lyrics from the metal band in my head

2 total reviews 
Comment from Gayla putnam
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I had to read this a bunch of times. I liked the repeated chorus and pre-chorus, though I wish they had been typed out where they belonged. I soldiered through, and after 4 or 5 times, I had the cadence perfect and enjoyed the poem. I like the spotlight invasive and hollow in the brain, Worry about forgetting driving me insane. As I age, that line resounds to me. gayla

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Gayla
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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I feel your desperation but the lyrics of this song are uneven and don't flow as a song should. 500 days until Trump becomes president is a concern for everyone who is on his shit list.
Jesse

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
    Thank you, Jesse
reply by Jesse James Doty on 06-Dec-2024
    I'm just being honest, Mike.