At least I can dream
A 3-5-3 Poem5 total reviews
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This is a great 3-5-3 poem. I like how you tell your body it's 21 so then it is. I wish it would be that simple. Oh youth how I miss it sometimes.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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This is a great 3-5-3 poem. I like how you tell your body it's 21 so then it is. I wish it would be that simple. Oh youth how I miss it sometimes.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much
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You're welcome
Cecilia
Comment from Nicki.B
This is a great 3-5-3 a fun humorous one! And yes that's is one of thr unfortunate things about getting older that things start to eventually travel south lol! I suppose the other side of the coin is how lucky are all who get to live to an age where they will go south. Well done and I wish you the very best in the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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This is a great 3-5-3 a fun humorous one! And yes that's is one of thr unfortunate things about getting older that things start to eventually travel south lol! I suppose the other side of the coin is how lucky are all who get to live to an age where they will go south. Well done and I wish you the very best in the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Oh, how often that thought comes to many of us out here!! A fun look at the inevitable here -- just keep on smiling about it! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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LOL!! Oh, how often that thought comes to many of us out here!! A fun look at the inevitable here -- just keep on smiling about it! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem hit me hard in the best way! The raw honesty made such an impact. I can relate! Your ability to say so much with so little is amazing. This one really stuck with me!
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Your poem hit me hard in the best way! The raw honesty made such an impact. I can relate! Your ability to say so much with so little is amazing. This one really stuck with me!
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you so very much
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, I've discovered that when I look in the mirror, I discover the way I feel, and the way I look are not the same, I feel pRetty the same as when young, but who's that guy in the mirror? Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Oh yes, I've discovered that when I look in the mirror, I discover the way I feel, and the way I look are not the same, I feel pRetty the same as when young, but who's that guy in the mirror? Beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much
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Welcome