A Bit of A Scare At Christmas
The story that almost wasn't21 total reviews
Comment from Jacob1395
I think you know you've written something special when you're scared by your own work. I really enjoyed reading this piece, Carol, and I loved how you upped the tension. An excellent piece.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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I think you know you've written something special when you're scared by your own work. I really enjoyed reading this piece, Carol, and I loved how you upped the tension. An excellent piece.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Caught between a thriller with ghosts and the holiday spirit, tossing it around and this is what one gets. thanks for reading and enjoying.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
You should have saved this for tomorrow. I could have given you a six then. This was wonderful. The angst of contest writing. The muse not helping out as it should, and the complete involvement in your writing that takes you away from the normal parts of life. A hand on the shoulder, classic. Karen
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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You should have saved this for tomorrow. I could have given you a six then. This was wonderful. The angst of contest writing. The muse not helping out as it should, and the complete involvement in your writing that takes you away from the normal parts of life. A hand on the shoulder, classic. Karen
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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How kind of you, sweetie. I appreciate the thought and the virtual six anytime. I guess I was torn between my thriller with ghosts and the season of joy...thus we got a little of both. Thanks so much.
Smiles, Carol
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You are one of my favorites. Both as a person and a writer. Have a blessed week. Keep Da Mommy Yvonne in your thoughts. Karen
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Thank you, my dear. I appreciate the kindness. Take care!
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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
What a great story. It's funny how the evening went on and Clare scared the wholly crap out of herself. It was quite funny when her son touched her shoulder and she almost flew through the roof. That's funny I don't care who you are.
Well done my friend.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Carol,
What a great story. It's funny how the evening went on and Clare scared the wholly crap out of herself. It was quite funny when her son touched her shoulder and she almost flew through the roof. That's funny I don't care who you are.
Well done my friend.
Cecilia
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Hi there Sweetie.... Finally landed at home and needed a bit of Christmas spirit...or "jolt" to get back into the mood. Glad you enjoyed.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a new creative twist...a scary Christmas story. Clair's muse is like mine. She comes when she feels like it. Lol. I like to enter contests, but my muse couldn't care less. That's why I can relate to your cute Christmas story. I love that Claire was ready to write by the story's end.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This is a new creative twist...a scary Christmas story. Clair's muse is like mine. She comes when she feels like it. Lol. I like to enter contests, but my muse couldn't care less. That's why I can relate to your cute Christmas story. I love that Claire was ready to write by the story's end.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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As you can tell, I had just landed back home and was settling in...no Christmas cheer was here yet...so I was torn between the jolly holly and the thrillers with Garth and Donatelli.... so you got a touch of both. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
I think we are are all terrified of publicly displaying our so called writing is a very humbling experience,, I'm so glad you are writing about this experience, I'm not sure of my abilities , but I will say you're outstanding abilities, are impressing me, and probably others, beautifully written blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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I think we are are all terrified of publicly displaying our so called writing is a very humbling experience,, I'm so glad you are writing about this experience, I'm not sure of my abilities , but I will say you're outstanding abilities, are impressing me, and probably others, beautifully written blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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You are walking in the shoes God meant for you to wear and your sharing of your faith poems touches so many. We are blessed by what you post. I so appreciate that you enjoy my efforts as well.
Smiles, Carol
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You are kind
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This short story was fun, entertaining, realistic to read. I really enjoyed reading this. I think it's one of the best things you've written. Thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This short story was fun, entertaining, realistic to read. I really enjoyed reading this. I think it's one of the best things you've written. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thanks, Barbara.... I had just gotten home from traveling and my house was barren of Christmas cheer. So I was torn between the "Holy Jolly" and the thriller with Garth and Donatelli... thus you got a bit of both.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, Carol, well done. Last night, Humpwhistle read from the new Christmas book on a Zoom call promoted by the book's publisher. After it was over, the moderator asked about his relationship with his characters. He replied, "They boss me around." So, it stands to reason they could scare you! Terry.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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LOL, Carol, well done. Last night, Humpwhistle read from the new Christmas book on a Zoom call promoted by the book's publisher. After it was over, the moderator asked about his relationship with his characters. He replied, "They boss me around." So, it stands to reason they could scare you! Terry.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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I wanted to hear the podcast but I was flying high with United at the time. I hope that it went well and your book sales are rising and doing well. I published my first a few weeks ago, but I don't know anything about promoting it. Thank you so much for the marvelous stars and kind comments.
Smiles, Carol
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Carol, Lee stole the show. He is charming, endearing, and wonderful. You go to YouTube and search: Atmosphere Press. It should come up. Lee starts reading at about the 25 minute mark...and the next twenty minutes are very fun! Terry.l
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Carol,
This is an awesome story! I sit sometimes and glare at an empty notebook, as I try to come up with a new and interesting poem or story. I can refer to my muse as being a sleeping beauty that never completely wakes up.
Good luck with all your writing, Carol.
Have a blessed Christmas,
Cindy
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Carol,
This is an awesome story! I sit sometimes and glare at an empty notebook, as I try to come up with a new and interesting poem or story. I can refer to my muse as being a sleeping beauty that never completely wakes up.
Good luck with all your writing, Carol.
Have a blessed Christmas,
Cindy
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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I've had that type of muse plenty of times, but lately, I've been lucky and mines on a roll. Appreciate the read and the kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi Carol, this was an excellent story. It was exciting and compelling. I like the fact you have the reader guessing . I really thought it was a ghost. Great writing.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Hi Carol, this was an excellent story. It was exciting and compelling. I like the fact you have the reader guessing . I really thought it was a ghost. Great writing.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Hi, Brenda...So happy that you enjoyed the story. I'm stuck between Christmas merriment and the ghostly thriller, I guess. So you got a touch of both! Thanks so much.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
This is a delightful story and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It flows very well, but it is rather loud and it does keep the reader and suspense. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a very wonderful weekend. May God bless you. Merry Christmas. Patricia.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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This is a delightful story and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It flows very well, but it is rather loud and it does keep the reader and suspense. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a very wonderful weekend. May God bless you. Merry Christmas. Patricia.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thanks, Patricia. I've never heard my stories on audio. Guess I will have to do that some time. Thanks as always.
Smiles, Carol