Toddler Time
The thoughts process of a toddler2 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
I give five stars for the meaning, though you may need to revisit this, as a 2-4-2 prompt entry, "I'm hungry" 3-syllables, "Demands a rainbow" 5-syllables, you will need to edit****kahpot
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I give five stars for the meaning, though you may need to revisit this, as a 2-4-2 prompt entry, "I'm hungry" 3-syllables, "Demands a rainbow" 5-syllables, you will need to edit****kahpot
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
Comment from MissMerri
Hmmmm... I'm hungry too, for Neopolitan ice cream. ;p I struggled with this a little bit. I'm sure I've missed some of what you were intending to convey and I apologize. My confusion I think, originates with the word "demands." I don't see a demand, though perhaps a child saying "I'm hungry" is similar to a demand. Then you end with "sleep now" which tended to confuse me further. I hope you will explain what was in your mind as you wrote this. Thanks. MM
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Hmmmm... I'm hungry too, for Neopolitan ice cream. ;p I struggled with this a little bit. I'm sure I've missed some of what you were intending to convey and I apologize. My confusion I think, originates with the word "demands." I don't see a demand, though perhaps a child saying "I'm hungry" is similar to a demand. Then you end with "sleep now" which tended to confuse me further. I hope you will explain what was in your mind as you wrote this. Thanks. MM
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024