Screams of the Shadows
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "The Pursuit"In the dark, the screams never stop.
3 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Decision was made....now what? Did she make the right one or will something horrible come of it? chills everywhere and no true answer. we wait!
Smiles, Carol
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Decision was made....now what? Did she make the right one or will something horrible come of it? chills everywhere and no true answer. we wait!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow, your story really draws me in with its fast paced atmosphere! The tension in every scene kept me on edge. I especially loved the moment when the case pulses with light and pushes the shadows back. The ending
leaves me wanting more - there's so much mystery left! Keep up the great work! The tension you create is fantastic!
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Wow, your story really draws me in with its fast paced atmosphere! The tension in every scene kept me on edge. I especially loved the moment when the case pulses with light and pushes the shadows back. The ending
leaves me wanting more - there's so much mystery left! Keep up the great work! The tension you create is fantastic!
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Always worry when those doorways open out of nowhere... Good action and intrigue here even though I am not read in on previous chapters... Good luck with the book and thanx for sharing! ;)
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Always worry when those doorways open out of nowhere... Good action and intrigue here even though I am not read in on previous chapters... Good luck with the book and thanx for sharing! ;)
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
