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Screams of the Shadows

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In the dark, the screams never stop.

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Comment from Begin Again
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Hmmm.. now does she trust her look-alike it the unknown that has been guiding her from the first.... which one is really concerned about her. Very interesting and on the edge of my seat reading.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2024

Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I really enjoyed the way you built up the tension in your story. The atmosphere in the room felt alive. The dialogue between Sarah and her double is really interesting. The twist with the phone messages kept me on edge. Your pacing is spot on! I'm curious to see where this wild ride leads. Keep it up!

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2024