BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Seeds Prepare to Bloom"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
14 total reviews
Comment from Trina Layne
Inspires thought and motivation. Congrats on your writing. Thanks for sharing. I am trying my hand at doing more short-form pieces. I may take a look at the Renga collection. Sounds interesting.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Inspires thought and motivation. Congrats on your writing. Thanks for sharing. I am trying my hand at doing more short-form pieces. I may take a look at the Renga collection. Sounds interesting.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
gypsy
Comment from BethShelby
I am enjoying reading all of the Renga poems that people or writing. I like the one about seed having a divine promise that although they ar small one day they will be beautiful.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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I am enjoying reading all of the Renga poems that people or writing. I like the one about seed having a divine promise that although they ar small one day they will be beautiful.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
gypsy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like you are yearning for spring here and your poem gives us hope that those seeds will eventually bloom after a long cold winter, we have a long wait and in the meantime your words are uplifting, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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It sounds like you are yearning for spring here and your poem gives us hope that those seeds will eventually bloom after a long cold winter, we have a long wait and in the meantime your words are uplifting, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 07-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
gypsy
Comment from estory
A nice rendering in this classic haiku like form, you have the nature image, the balance and the epiphany moment. The imagery here speaks of the promise of nature, the hope contained in the coiled up seeds, ready to sprout. "Divine promise" is the operative phrase, lifting this physical image into the plane of the spiritual, making something sacred out of life. estory
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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A nice rendering in this classic haiku like form, you have the nature image, the balance and the epiphany moment. The imagery here speaks of the promise of nature, the hope contained in the coiled up seeds, ready to sprout. "Divine promise" is the operative phrase, lifting this physical image into the plane of the spiritual, making something sacred out of life. estory
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 estory
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, I like that premise, thst nature quite definitely have a divine appointment and purpose as all living things do, even the humble seed has been appointed to that divine plan, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Oh yes, I like that premise, thst nature quite definitely have a divine appointment and purpose as all living things do, even the humble seed has been appointed to that divine plan, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy hugs 😊
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Well done
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I believe God puts people in our paths so they can plant seeds. With His help those seeds grow into beautiful things. I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem and viewing this wonderful presentation. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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I believe God puts people in our paths so they can plant seeds. With His help those seeds grow into beautiful things. I enjoyed reading this wonderful poem and viewing this wonderful presentation. Thank you for sharing your God given talent with us.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Bill Schott
This renga section, Seeds Prepare to Bloom, has the proper formatting and sends out the hope that the future will be here in a minute or two -- or three.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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This renga section, Seeds Prepare to Bloom, has the proper formatting and sends out the hope that the future will be here in a minute or two -- or three.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-Thanks for making this book; it
is a great activity and project.
-You wrote a very good haiku
with a good topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery
as "seeds prepare to bloom."
-A good contrast with "leafless boughs."
-A good satori line. Very well done.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-Thanks for making this book; it
is a great activity and project.
-You wrote a very good haiku
with a good topic.
-Effective nature and seasonal imagery
as "seeds prepare to bloom."
-A good contrast with "leafless boughs."
-A good satori line. Very well done.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Pam
Gypsy hugs 😊
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You are very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Barry Penfold
I must say I like your Renga but still have not grasped its full meaning. I like what I see and read, and I will explore your offerings more closely. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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I must say I like your Renga but still have not grasped its full meaning. I like what I see and read, and I will explore your offerings more closely. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much, Barry
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
I can tell from reading the others that this Renga poem is well correlated with the other poems. It is quite beautiful and committed to the origin of the style and format, thus fitting the criteria very well.
Nicely done.
RJ
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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I can tell from reading the others that this Renga poem is well correlated with the other poems. It is quite beautiful and committed to the origin of the style and format, thus fitting the criteria very well.
Nicely done.
RJ
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ