BOOK OF RENGA POEMS
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Herald of Summer"Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem
3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Herald of Summer, has the proper formatting and sees the very first indications that the sleep of the winter season has ended, and the bright eyes of life are opening. Nice.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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This haiku, Herald of Summer, has the proper formatting and sees the very first indications that the sleep of the winter season has ended, and the bright eyes of life are opening. Nice.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
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Hi Bill, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent chapter for our Renga Book. The Renga form has the right renga composition. Beautiful presentation but it's hard to read the font, I suggest a lighter font and bigger font. Good syllables and connection between lines. Thank you for participating in our book with such a beautiful verse.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Excellent chapter for our Renga Book. The Renga form has the right renga composition. Beautiful presentation but it's hard to read the font, I suggest a lighter font and bigger font. Good syllables and connection between lines. Thank you for participating in our book with such a beautiful verse.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Hi gypsy, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from lyenochka
It's wonderful to think about the summer fruits that are hidden in the branches that are budding and blooming in the spring. Great little poem for this Renga book!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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It's wonderful to think about the summer fruits that are hidden in the branches that are budding and blooming in the spring. Great little poem for this Renga book!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Hi lyenochka, thank you for your comments and review. Dove