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A Little Holiday Magic

Meet Tinsel - Our Elf On The Shelf

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Comment from LJbutterfly
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Last year, some of the residents in my community posted funny pictures of their elf on a shelf as they put it in funny positions in their house, like sliding down a banister, sitting on top of the toilet tank, or holding a cookie.

Your Tinsel is just as funny as he adds Christmas joy and smiles. I liked the idea of each child singing their favorite Christmas song. This story puts us in a festive mood. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    Thanks Lorraine...We had the elf being tied up by a gallon of milk. Carissa drew his eyes and wrapped a bandana around the jug. The note read...The milk has gone bad.
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Carol,
This is a lovely Christmas story entry.
Great characterization and a magic story.
Christmas is a magic time . I'm remembering all the wonderful Christmases I had as a child. We kids would wait to hear reindeer's hoofs on our roof: bits of coal thanks to my creative mom and dad who told us Santa wasn't coming in til we fell asleep.
Your story brought back wonderful memories for me.
Best wishes, Carol.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    I'm glad you enjoyed and you got to reminisce with a few of your memories as well.
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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You use aromas wafting from the kitchen twice; perhaps another way of writing that so it's not repetitive?

This was a sweet story, Carol. It was very much your style, and you have brought us a little Christmas magic for this contest entry.

I wish you luck. And a Merry Christmas!

xo


 Comment Written 06-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    Just landed back home after traveling so I am far behind again. I thank you for reading my Christmas story and for enjoying it as well.
    Smiles and Meryy Christmas!
    Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
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This is a cute story for Christmas, and I love meeting Tinsel. He's a bit mischievous, but fun for the children. His making snow angels in the flour is a fun idea. I'm sure your grandchildren love being included in this story. Blessings, and best wishes in the contest. Carol

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    It was a mess to clean up afterwards but Camryn loved it. We gave her a gallon of milk with eyes and a bandana and the elf tied up. The sign said...The milk has gone bad. LOl
    Smiles, Carol
reply by Carol Clark2 on 07-Dec-2024
    Sounds like you had a wonderful time together! Glad you made it home safely. How was Matthew's premiere?
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    It's tonight! Fingers crossed!
Comment from karenina
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This is a fine Christmas story, Carol!
Tinsel is a clever elf--creating a bit of a mess which brought the kids together in the spirit of believing in the magic of the season!

We all need that!

Karenina

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    Just landed back home after traveling so I am far behind again. I thank you for reading my Christmas story and for enjoying it as well.
    Smiles and Merry Christmas!
    Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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Aww, I never did stop believing. All my friends at school stopped, but I didn't, I knew if I stopped believing I wouldn't get any more presents!!! It did stop though, so I guess I was on his naughty list! Lol.
I loved this little story of Tinsel, he's a fun little chappie. Well done, my friend, this is a story that could be told again and again. Good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    It was a mess to clean up afterwards but Camryn loved it. We gave her a gallon of milk with eyes and a bandana and the elf tied up. The sign said...The milk has gone bad. LOl
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very delightful Christmas story and I love stories like this. It is so positive and its attitudes and I also enjoy that very much in this world today there are so many who are negative and when I hear or read positive things it lightens my heart, a great deal. Patricia

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    Just landed back home after traveling so I am far behind again. I thank you for reading my Christmas story and for enjoying it as well.
    Smiles and Merry Christmas!
    Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Tis the season, and it's always fun to read about the younger ones and hope they will have a wonderful holiday. "Merry Christmas to all, and to all a good night!" Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    It was a mess to clean up afterwards but Camryn loved it. We gave her a gallon of milk with eyes and a bandana and the elf tied up. The sign said...The milk has gone bad. LOl
    Smiles, Carol
reply by Ric Myworld on 07-Dec-2024
    Glad you're back home safe and sound! I'm sure you had a wonderful time and are filled with more new stories than you can write. :-)
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    I know I feel regenerated at least for the moment. I'm going back to surprise them for Christmas since my daughter here as informed me they won't be coming to my house... all is good!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is such a sweet Christmas story. The Elf come to life and giving the children their belief back in Christmas miracles, even with they are older, is a neat idea, probably a Christmas story winning idea.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    It was a mess to clean up afterwards but Camryn loved it. We gave her a gallon of milk with eyes and a bandana and the elf tied up. The sign said...The milk has gone bad. LOl
    Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
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What a lovely Christmas story - imaginaytive and magical, and it is lovely that you used the great grandchildren's names. Your story is filled with warmth and love. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    It was a mess to clean up afterwards but Camryn loved it. We gave her a gallon of milk with eyes and a bandana and the elf tied up. The sign said...The milk has gone bad. LOl
    Smiles, Carol