Anatomy of a Marriage
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Anatomy of a Marriage Ch.14"A story of a couple whose marriage is in trouble.
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Comment from royowen
I'm not sure what real difference seperation would make, but it does seem the right way to go if there is a chance of redeeming what might be lost. But it seems to me that 4:00 am homecomings are extremely suspicious, unless there is a undeniably good reason for it. Beautifully written Beth, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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I'm not sure what real difference seperation would make, but it does seem the right way to go if there is a chance of redeeming what might be lost. But it seems to me that 4:00 am homecomings are extremely suspicious, unless there is a undeniably good reason for it. Beautifully written Beth, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Roy. I guess she wants to hang on as long as she can.
Beth
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Probably good
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Not only did Marsha find out the ins and outs of legal separation, but your readers did too. That's helpful. Now we'll see what Marsha does with the information and when she confronts Trenton.
Good chapter, Beth.
xo
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Not only did Marsha find out the ins and outs of legal separation, but your readers did too. That's helpful. Now we'll see what Marsha does with the information and when she confronts Trenton.
Good chapter, Beth.
xo
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Pam. I appreciate your review and comments.
Beth
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Thank you, Pam. I appreciate your review and comments.
Beth
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray for Marsha for going through with the consultation. It sounds like a good way to go and I'm glad that she's still considering seeking marriage counseling. I wonder if the lawyer would have given her more advice had she told him about the salary that was being used for the other woman.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Hooray for Marsha for going through with the consultation. It sounds like a good way to go and I'm glad that she's still considering seeking marriage counseling. I wonder if the lawyer would have given her more advice had she told him about the salary that was being used for the other woman.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Helen. It was time she found out what she might be facing. She wants the to work out so she won't be forced to get a divorce.
Beth
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
The story continues to hold my interest with much sympathy for the wife in a very bad situation. I don't think her husband will be interested in a separation or divorce, and not being a truthful man, may also turn violent,
especially when drinking.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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The story continues to hold my interest with much sympathy for the wife in a very bad situation. I don't think her husband will be interested in a separation or divorce, and not being a truthful man, may also turn violent,
especially when drinking.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Verna. I appreciate your comment. He sees to want to stay married but play around as well.
Beth
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Thank you, Verna. I appreciate your comment. He sees to want to stay married but play around as well.
Beth
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Setting up the stage for the inevitable here it seems... but we all ride it out as we can... good advice to NOT take advice from the spouse involved... sigh. Thanx for sharing this next chapter... :-) Yvette
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Setting up the stage for the inevitable here it seems... but we all ride it out as we can... good advice to NOT take advice from the spouse involved... sigh. Thanx for sharing this next chapter... :-) Yvette
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you again for a nice review. I'm pleased you are still reviewing my chapters.
Beth
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Thank you again for a nice review. I'm pleased you are still reviewing my chapters.
Beth
Comment from Ric Myworld
Oh, yes, those wonderful attorneys, who all work together, scratching each others backs. The most tainted system in the world, where justice is seldom served. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Oh, yes, those wonderful attorneys, who all work together, scratching each others backs. The most tainted system in the world, where justice is seldom served. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Ric. I'm sure they do all stick together. I've never dealt with but one lawyer and he won a nice settlement for me against a drug company and they are the ones who paid him.
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Thank you, Ric. I'm sure they do all stick together. I've never dealt with but one lawyer and he won a nice settlement for me against a drug company and they are the ones who paid him.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written chapter for your book and it flows very well when it is read aloud. You have kept my interest as I was listening to it. May you have a wonderful day terrific weekend and merry Christmas. Patricia.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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This is a very well written chapter for your book and it flows very well when it is read aloud. You have kept my interest as I was listening to it. May you have a wonderful day terrific weekend and merry Christmas. Patricia.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Patricia. I'm pleased you are still interested in my story.
Beth
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Thank you, Patricia. I'm pleased you are still interested in my story.
Beth
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Once the trust has gone in a marriage, it is very hard to regain the confidence to trust again. Trenton has been frugal with the truth and his actions are not what you expect from a loyal, loving husband. Marsha has had a rude awakening and sometimes you have to gain some self respect and not allow someone to treat you badly. Another fine chapter Beth, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Once the trust has gone in a marriage, it is very hard to regain the confidence to trust again. Trenton has been frugal with the truth and his actions are not what you expect from a loyal, loving husband. Marsha has had a rude awakening and sometimes you have to gain some self respect and not allow someone to treat you badly. Another fine chapter Beth, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Dolly. I appreciate you comments. They are very true.
Beth
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Thank you, Dolly. I appreciate you comments. They are very true.
Beth
Comment from Wendy G
She is wise to know the ins and outs of a legal separation and her entitlements for that scenario. She has been very trusting in the past and it will be a big step for her if it comes to that.
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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She is wise to know the ins and outs of a legal separation and her entitlements for that scenario. She has been very trusting in the past and it will be a big step for her if it comes to that.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Wendy. It had to point she would have to know what her rights were before making a decision.
Beth
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Thank you, Wendy. It had to point she would have to know what her rights were before making a decision.
Beth
Comment from Teri7
Beth, This is a very well written chapter. You used great descriptive words and very good dialogue between Marsha and the divorce attorney. I look forward to the next chapter. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Beth, This is a very well written chapter. You used great descriptive words and very good dialogue between Marsha and the divorce attorney. I look forward to the next chapter. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Teri. I appreciate your review and comments.
Beth
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Thank you, Teri. I appreciate your review and comments.
Beth
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I truly enjoy reading your writing my friend! love and blessings, Teri