Santa's Adventures
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Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet , you now have two votes!
I love that your flaw is that you don't think you have flaws. That made me chuckle.
And then you give a lengthy descriptions of your so called "virtues" .
You breed to bring ruin to the welfare budget.
You sell drugs which boost business in the hood.
Your waste profumes and
your snot tastes like fondue.
Every time I will see the word fondue now your line will come to mind.
I think this is the best line :
while meth maintains my morning wood.
On the internet I learned a lot including this particular morning occurrence: (biggrin)
The last line is just dark humour (?) at its best :
Dying before you pay your debts would definitely piss off your creditors.
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Ciao poet , you now have two votes!
I love that your flaw is that you don't think you have flaws. That made me chuckle.
And then you give a lengthy descriptions of your so called "virtues" .
You breed to bring ruin to the welfare budget.
You sell drugs which boost business in the hood.
Your waste profumes and
your snot tastes like fondue.
Every time I will see the word fondue now your line will come to mind.
I think this is the best line :
while meth maintains my morning wood.
On the internet I learned a lot including this particular morning occurrence: (biggrin)
The last line is just dark humour (?) at its best :
Dying before you pay your debts would definitely piss off your creditors.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
Comment from EILEEN LAW
Holy crap!
this one is a humdinger! At first I wanted to sympathize, like the writer is a famous person who is sick and tired of the paparazzi but then it twisted into self - maniacal and Narcissistic and inward.
I loved to hate you.
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Holy crap!
this one is a humdinger! At first I wanted to sympathize, like the writer is a famous person who is sick and tired of the paparazzi but then it twisted into self - maniacal and Narcissistic and inward.
I loved to hate you.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
This poem is a bit risk'e. I like it though. Good for you for writing a poem about your morning wood. I think it's hilarious. I don't care who you are that shit is funny.
Great job and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
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This poem is a bit risk'e. I like it though. Good for you for writing a poem about your morning wood. I think it's hilarious. I don't care who you are that shit is funny.
Great job and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
