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BOOK OF RENGA POEMS

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Renga is a collective poets Japanese poem

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Comment from Begin Again
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If we believe as we should, we must put the problems and all our worries in his hands and trust that they will be taken care of as He sees fit. That's a difficult task but we all should work on it.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    Thanks Carol, for these super comments and review blessings Roy
Comment from judiverse
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Interesting comments, and so true. Your note is correct. You live longer if you believe instead of worrying. I'm a big one for worrying, so this really strikes me. Striking artwork choice, and your syllable count is right on. Glad you wrote for the book. judi

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    Thanks Judi, for these positive comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Oh, so wisely said here, sir!! I might have to jump into the Book here as I just love some of these offerings!! ;) Thanx, as always, for sharing that pen of yours! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2024
    Thanks Yvette, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Wendy G
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Worry is indeed a thief of joy and peace, however I don't necessarily agree with your notes as worry does not necessarily shorten one's life, and nor does believing necessarily prolong one's life. God takes people who are believers very young sometimes, and worriers do sometimes live long and unhappy lives. It's His timing and choice.
Wendy

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
    I did look up what worry and the lack of it does medically. Wendy. Thank you, Blessings Roy
reply by Wendy G on 05-Dec-2024
    It is possible for it to shorten life, but one cannot or should not generalize.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
    I think you're right, but worry certainly affects health, and health ultimately affects longevity, and on that premise I stand Wendy.
Comment from DonandVicki
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It doesn't seem to matter how much you worry, It know that God has his plan and whether I worry or put the situation in His hands, His will be done. Don

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
    Thanks D&V , for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
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So true! We do lose so much when we worry and it shows how much we depend on our own sense of being in control over our circumstances. Only God has everything in His control. Thanks for adding to the book!

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
    Thanks Helen, for these fantastic comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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I like your line - worrying is but a thief - I know as I've worked hard to leave that worrier valda behind me and I do believe that worrying is a wasted emotion, trouble is it took me too many years to realise that. A nice addition to this Reng book, Roy.
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
    Thanks Valda, for these fantastic comments and a wonderful review, blessings Roy
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent chapter for our Renga Book. The Renga form has the right renga composition. Beautiful presentation. Good syllables and connection between lines. I agree with you, there is no need to worry, God will provide what we need.

Thank you for participating in our book with such a beautiful verse.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
    Thanks Kahpot, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from jim vecchio
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This is a good saying, and absolutely true. I'm a bit confused about the Renga Book. Are you responding to someone's words or is someone else going to continue your phrase, or can anyone join in?

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
    I'm responding to someone else's word, the three haiku is first, then the two line comes after Jim, have a go at it, it will bless you, and will bless Gypsy, too, blessings Roy
reply by jim vecchio on 04-Dec-2024
    I was just wondering. Sounds like fun!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
    Yep
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I agree with you. I would rather believe than worry too. We can give our worries over to God. I enjoyed reading this cute poem and the message it brings to us. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
    Thanks Barbara, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy