Sport
2D Acrostic describing SPORT4 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Gotta love the phrasing of your closing line there! And overall a great answer to this challenging form! :-) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Gotta love the phrasing of your closing line there! And overall a great answer to this challenging form! :-) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 09-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much :)
Comment from Gayla putnam
I have never seen a poem in this form. It's incredibly clever, and I pondered each line, ensuring you hadn't made a mistake. It's humorous and oh-so-true. I especially liked the last line. gayla
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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I have never seen a poem in this form. It's incredibly clever, and I pondered each line, ensuring you hadn't made a mistake. It's humorous and oh-so-true. I especially liked the last line. gayla
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Well, thank you so much for being so thorough and taking the time to review. I had never seen this type either until I read the prompt. :)
Comment from Rick Gardner
Very interesting, I like this and is there more to review. Noticed no skis as skiers on the world levels are the best athletes around. Going 70 miles per hour, flying over jumps and landing 100 meters down the hill. Life threatening possibilities every day, every run. Not any other sport is that dangerous. I ski and can jump off cliffs, reach 45 miles per hour at times. the trees don't get out of your way.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Very interesting, I like this and is there more to review. Noticed no skis as skiers on the world levels are the best athletes around. Going 70 miles per hour, flying over jumps and landing 100 meters down the hill. Life threatening possibilities every day, every run. Not any other sport is that dangerous. I ski and can jump off cliffs, reach 45 miles per hour at times. the trees don't get out of your way.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2024
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Oh my goodness! I remember going skiing in sixth grade for a field trip. I was a competitive swimmer and I don't know how people do what you do! I'm sure it's an adrenaline rush and for me it would just be probably a fear ride lol
Thank you for your review.
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Lived a dangerous life, cows trying to crush me, snakes constricting my body, a cat trying to castrate me, that was just work, the mountains came to get away at times. I put my life in their control.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is a great exercise in playing with words! It is so creative how you wrote this. There's a real sense of focus and determination in your writing. It's got great energy!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Your poem is a great exercise in playing with words! It is so creative how you wrote this. There's a real sense of focus and determination in your writing. It's got great energy!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2024
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Thank you so much. It is fun to try the different styles from the promptings. It stretches my mind to be more creative. That's for sure. Thank you for reviewing and your kind words.