Comment from
Shanbreen
Lana, this is a straightforward rhyming poem that meets the criterion of sharing a story in a poem. What I liked about the poem is the imagery it creates. Wishing you the best for the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
Thank you so much for taking the time to review this. And thank you for your kind words and well wishes.
Comment from
Noble Collins
Another winner. Your sense of imagination and straightforward word usage continue to serve you well. I will stand by for more. I also have a writing which includes a bear. I'm new here too.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
Why thank you Noble! I appreciate it.